Hi kurosagi-san

i already read ur story , it's so interesting & attractive specialy ur way in
descirption besides the action is great << i don't like sleepy stories ! :P

as "dragonier-san" said ,, ur way of writing & using strong vocabulary has emproved alot . 'masha2 allah

guess yukiko-san will work with Dr. brain over letting her children die in front of her eyes

waiting for ur next chapters .. ... keep wiritng ... & go0od luck