Farewell My Friend ...Part 1,2 +3 In The Limits Of Time

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Back :)

Oh, my eyes!O
Excuse me Kurosagi , at first I want to suggest small Idea
Can you color or highlight names and speeches in the story ? O
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Great story’s thoughts
I read it from the beginning to end
I liked these sentences
“As they turned to Dr. Peter, he was 5 steps aside from them with sly smile”
and
(my son was going to be killed while he was held in my arm)
(: it was much enthusiasm

“a huge hand has reached out helping him. That hand belongs to a very huge
strange body which looks more like a giant human”.
he imagined all things against him
he saw a huge hand whereas it was just his sister’s hand
Wonderful description

“ Don’t worry, at least they won’t kill me since they want the information from me”

“(I’m sorry ...Since I know nothing about the information they want, it means they’ll kill me anyway... I
really don’t know where Dr. Edward went after I had rescued him)”
I think Mr. Akai will miss a dear thing at least his hand :P

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“Aren’t there any guide map??!!” Kyo wasbellyaching."We are aright just now…but then…
you never know what might happen" said Kyo
“But Kyo has sat down his head between his knees, holding his legs with his arms”

Kyo’s view to what happened was pessimism
what will this kid do in the next part?O

I’m waiting
Your writing is really impressive

والسلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته