Two Powers In The Age Of Hours "Long Story"xd

[أسمـــاء]

kytoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
i will kill u this time
of course my participating is becoming less than befor and that's out of my hand
still, i will not be late to write a comment in your amazing stories that i waite-yes0" class="inlineimg" />
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Chapter 2

"The Vampire Slayer"

hahaahah
that's why u were asking about what i like the most ha
didn't know u were preparing this beautiful surprise
hmmmmm
to design my character...
i will definatly kill u....
I loved my character sir but i'm not evil ya??
u know , it touches something inside me
u are the best novalist sir
go ahead
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Kyto sama^^
i have a reason^^
i was lazy here
coz i was busy killing vampires out there

[lolleta]

the 2nd character was a bomb
yes .. also i think that azuma like that

but .. now i became afraid from her a little bit
i must deal with her more carefully

thanks kyto ... i'm interisting while reading
so .. waitng for the next

[kyto kid]

Hajimi San

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i am really happy that you like "ghost island"xd

and about the movie ofcourse

i watched it and it is awesom movie but the end was sad as the mother and her daughter cant return to the real world and her husbnd cant see them

and thanks man for calling me genius haha


Omegamon

Hey man how are you ?i am really happy that you are intersting in the story and dont worry i wrote the third chapter hope you will like it

Mis Eima

hey sis ^_^

how are you ?i hope you are ok ..

and about the connection dont worry but i hope that Azuma wont die on your hands

and thanks Eima againg for your nice words

Blue Star

haha hey Star how are u?first of all thanks for the flowers ^^

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second thanks for your comment in my topic ^^

and lastly keep shining in my topic please ^__^

Azuma

haha great anger

what an honour you are here i always happy when you and Eima in my topic coz we see u little time ^_^ but of course you are busy in killing vampires

and of course your character not evil it is good you will see^_^

but be careful Eima might kill u later ^_^

Lolleta

haha watch out Azuma read your words She Might Kill u

But dont worry you will understand what i mean in the 3rd chapter

surprise for you in 3rd chapter hope you will like it ^^


and for all of you

3rd chapter is added enjoy please and sorry for late

[mis eima]

kyto

you are so evil
you said i will be a good character
so how you gona make my kill Azuma

this is Absolute Evil
i'm realy angry

Azuma please kill him
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let's forget that for a while
i just read the 3rd chapter
the new character lolleta
will you make kill her too

ahh seeyou later

[lolleta]

woooooooooooooooooooow
lolleta >>>> the sniper
kyto ... what anice chapter
do u know ... i like action movies a lot
and to hear shooting voice
so when i read this

The boy said happily “well done Lolleta as usual you never miss a target “
Lolleta smiled “thanks brother do you really like my performance ,you know I am the best to use any types of snipers ,guns any thing with bullet

i felt that i'm in a real action movie

Her brother said “ok enough don’t be ego lets go home

yeh .. we shouldn't talk about ourselves more ( proudly )o
and let others talk as they want
in that way ... we become humble persons

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we can save the world as if we could change the past we could change the future

ahaa .. u mean that we must practice in the past
to see our ability to face the future
mmm .. amazing method
*****

And the time machine launched to its journey to the past

good luck lolleta ... may Allah help u
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thanks kyto ... great character u made me
waiting 4 the next

note ... every day .. i'm thinking how will u join the different characters at the end
but i can't imagin
masha'a Allah .. u have a great imagination horizon

so .. i'll just wait to see
c u

[coffee"]

What anice story here ^^
it's really amazing
actually you're good writer
">< i know that i'm late &
i'm sorry for that
i'll be weating for the next chapter
^^

[Hajime-san]

hiiiiiii
the sniper
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
i like it really....so she is "lolleta" the hero now hmmm
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sooo niiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
u're great kayto -san....l
so the girls will be together ....it'll be sooo cooooooooooooooooool
i can't wait
don't be late man ok ???l
so take care
wish for u a best luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck
bye

[Do Ri Me]

^^ Looooool
all of this
i didn't read any yet
...
when i get more free time in sha'a Allah
but i can say
masha'a Allah 3lek

see ya^^

[أسمـــاء]

i love people when the faith the deep faith appear inside their sparkling eyes

kyto sama...^^
a wise vampire killer saying^^
If my sword might cause my friends' death
"I swear I will get rid of my precious tressure" my sword
and kill vampires by my bear hands

Eima..^^
, i will not kill kyto coz u will not kill Azuma ya??
lollitta , i love vampire's stories and love to kill them thanks kyto u did well to chose me as a vampire killer

i really didn't read the last chapter but next time
if i have a free time i will
Allah bless u
eima, kyto and lolitta
see u around friends

[Rainbow Star]

wow
good going

thanx

[kyto kid]

Eima ^^



dont worry i am just kidding ^_____^ no kill for both of you

Azuma and Eima friends forever

about Lolleta I dont know yet but she is a good character but see the last of 4th chapter and you will see ^^


see you again Eima ^^

Lolleta

i am really happy now coz you like your character and i think it is really suitable for you ^^

and about the good luck i hope so but there is an enemy you will see in 4th chapter but no worry you have to live ^^

and good to see you again Lolleta ^^


Hajimi san

hehe hey man you just figured part of the next chapters so i must call you genius

and i am relly happy when i see you in my topic ..^^keep attending my topic ^^



Do Ri Me

what a return ^^ the archer here in my topic ,the 4th chapter match with your return ^^

and take your time sis dont worry ^^ and thanks for your nice words ^^

Azuma

i say to the wise Vampire slayer ^^ dont worry coz wise persons cant be killed easily and also Eima the mind controller difficult to kill her

and take your time Azuma dont worry ..allah help you ^^


Rain bow star

hey sis thanks for your beautiful words and thanks for your passing here ^^


and for all of u the 4th chapter is added

[Blue $tar]

hi hi
Kyto
I'm back again
and here's another flower for you
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wow cool sniper
and I really liked the archer
is she with the Dark King
!!and is he nice or what
I'm just wondering heh
I know when I read the whole story I'll know
what's going on

I like it ,
you put the members of the forum as characters
,,
I can't wait
I want to read the next chapter
hope you put it soon

C YA

[lolleta]

fainally ... the topic is sticky
oK .. so nice
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let's see the 4th ....
mmmmm.. do ri me .. nice character
nut i don't know why i became hate u
maybe cuz of that

Do Ri Me asked “and the mission
The Dark King Said “kill her
Do Ri Mi said “could I ask what is her name sir
The Dark king simply said “Lolleta or as they called her the Greatest Sniper
Do Ri Me Smiled “nice I will have a good time with that girl

ahaaa ... listen do ri me
as the Egyptian say
" هتغدى بيكي قبل ما تتعشي بيا "
and of course u know .. the gun stronre that the arch
i will kill u befor u think to catch ur arrow
so .. u had to say to ur king .... noooooo i cant
.....
i will say it for the last time ... don't try to face me
cus i'll defeat u
....
kyto ... when i read that

but no worry you have to live

i feel better
but i 'v some feeling tell me that the king of darkness will be u
if that right .. i will come to ur home and kill u by one bullet in ur head
i think that i can cuz we're in the same country and so near
right
??????????
thanks alot dear novelist
waiting 4 the next

[Do Ri Me]

huhuhu

thanx kyto
even though i didn't read any thing yet but it seems very excited
i cant concentrate in any thing coz of fasting

hey lollita i catch the Arabic writing
huhuhuhuh
no way

out of energy
see yaa

[Do Ri Me]

oh full stomach ... after break fast
hhhhoooo


finally I read all the Ch#s hmmmm

amazing ... I felt like I am watching anime ... or reading manga or even acting in a play ...

loool u got the right age ... 18 years old huhuhuh
but how tragic !!!
I owned my sister's life and my life to that Dark King

hmmm that's remind me of something ... but I can't define where where !!!
but I am okay ... I prefer the evil characters in any way huhuhuhuh

lolleta... the enemy !!! sorry for this but it can't be helped ....

as I said I don't regret it ...


so excited

[kyto kid]

Blue Star

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three flowers for u ^____^

welcome back again you are shining my topic

about the dark king ,,he is a bad guy ^^
and yes The archer with the dark king

about the other character ,, i will delay their appearance as the next chapter there is not any new character but i will show them later ^^
thanks again Blue star ^^


Lolleta

hi again ^^

yes i am happy that it became stick finally thanks to A and B

haha you will see abattle with do ri mi in the 5th chapter be careful ^^

and about the dark king no it is not me ,,dont worry i wont put my character in the
story ^^so i hope we are ok i did not want to be killed ^^

and thanks again Lolleta and happy birthday to u but i will say it tomorrow ^^


Do Ri Mr

the archer again ^^hey sis

really do u like the story ^^ coz i know you are masha allah brilliant at english so forgive me for grammatic mistake

and you are right i made the story like anime ..you got the idea ^^

oh i forget congratulation on your Medal you deserve it really

thanks again Do Ri Me




for all of you the 5th chapter is added but no new character yet i will add the other characters in the next chapters ^^

[Hajime-san]

what i see here hein
it's sooooooooooooooooo niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice & coooooooooooooooooool the chap
waaaaw the description of the fight between the girls was cool loooool
i like this part...l
keep going genius
Best luck

[Do Ri Me]

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A M A Z I N G


...
kyto
keep gung ho !!! yes ^^


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but more thing ... i am not that person who imagine ... i am more normal & ordinary


see ya'

[lolleta]

kytoooooo .... yeh ... now the real action
oooh .. i think that was the world war IIII
but how funny war

with the most modern weapons .. like the electronis arch
haha .. how wonder
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i didn't understand really .. who i must rescue ... Azuma or Eima
both r in danger

so .. it was the best chapter i like
and the best point i like indeed ...... the stimulative end

thanks kyto .. dont be late
( انا على نااااار )
sorry .. i cant translate it
cuz it will lose its meaning

c ya

[Schwert]

Kyto Kid how are you my friend, what's this brilliant topic that I see it here, it's amazing work man, beautiful hobby beautiful imagination and go on I'm sure u can become professional in this thing, I'm happy to participate here and sorry I arrived late, see you