oOo Wanderer oOo

[the Assassin]

Hey guys, long time no c, damn its been ages
since i wrote something around here

i missed ur naughty comments, and now at last
i'm here
well, i have written this strange scheme,
i donno if its cool, but gimme ur opinion


Anyways, lets go, but before we roll, how
is the fasting period going


i bet u all saying BAAAAAAAAGA



anyways, take this big smile and lets get real



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oOo Wanderer oOo




Walking beyond the lines of history
Where I saw my pathetic misery,

Found the some dusty memories,
Reading them and see my enemies,

Backstabbers & human eaters,
They killed my spirit & change my behavior.

Making me strong, and realizing that,
I need to be wise and freely act,

Going back to the unknown thing,
I sensed her; I felt I’m the king,

Saw her smile, pretty and cute,
Even she makes the whole world mute.

Donno what happened, but I felt some passion
Just for her which turn me in her lovely mansion

Now, I’m gazing at her tremendous way
By every single moment we play,

Don’t blame me coz I’m writing this down
And start calling me a rookie clown

One day you’ll know what I’m talking about
Coz there is no doubt, even if I shout

And say extra-loudly Layan
You will be my girl if I can, hold u more than,

Hundred years and more couple of weeks,
So that we could stay together so I don’t be geek,

C’mon, just smile I’m one crazy Lad,
Which gonna be a brilliant dad



Love ya. Layan



**

now off i go, but i'll be waiting for your comments

[أسمـــاء]

Hello there
sir , how are u doing
Hope you are fine
and of course I'm fine with Ramadan,thanks-flowers0" class="inlineimg" />
well it's such a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time as i see since you wrote such poem...





the poem is Wooow , It's something different
about someone has entered your life and lightened it..., i loved it,and to be honest , there were some tears ,
, because of the great passion u show , I really love that



.......................................

Walking beyond the lines of history
Where I saw my pathetic misery,

Found the some dusty memories,
Reading them and see my enemies,

............................................

sooo nice , i like it , u begin with sadness and blue period you've experienced
and that will go away once u see your baby's cute smile ^^ , that's really what i comperhend^^and here is the real toching passion


......................................

Donno what happened, but I felt some passion
Just for her which turn me in her lovely mansion

Now, I’m gazing at her tremendous way
By every single moment we play,

Don’t blame me coz I’m writing this down
And start calling me a rookie clown



And say extra-loudly Layan
You will be my girl if I can, hold u more than,




How touching !!! ...for the warm hearted one... , there will be tears here
I like it , may God save your cute girl to you ,how nice it is the passion between a daughter and her dad , i can see it would be so warm and lovely one if it goes as it should be






C’mon, just smile I’m one crazy Lad,
Which gonna be a brilliant dad










Do your Best
Otosa ^^


Thanks for the nice one , I've really enjoyed it
until we meet again
good luck^_^
Azuma

[the Assassin]

Hello there

sir , how are u doing

Hope you are fine

and of course I'm fine withRamadan,thanks

well it's such alooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time as i see since you wrote suchpoem...

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrr

onee-chan, where have u been its been an ages,

how s ramdan u said.. hahahaha

for me, its quite buzy, but yeah its something

else once u eat the first date hahahaha

thnx dear for being here

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anyways lets go for the real thing

the poem is Wooow , It's something different

about someone has entered your life and lightenedit..., i loved it,and to be honest , there were some tears ,

, because of the great passion u show , I really lovethat

I really admire what u have mentioned above, and I’m speechless to say

More, but u know once u write from the heart it will be shaper than

Any blade, and Thank Allah it was good enough

=)

And about the tears, sorry for that but u know love would do miracles

sooo nice , i like it , u begin with sadness and blue period you've experienced

and that will go away once u see your baby's cute smile , that's really what i comperhend^^

Yeb yeb mis-sharp-eye mashallah

U caught me form the first lines

Hahahahahha

Nice one azu-chan

U know we have to express things that occurred

To us to energize our sprits that we will have something

Better in future,

How touching !!!...for the warm hearted one... , there will be tearshere

I like it , may God save your cute girl to you ,how niceit is the passion between a daughter and her dad , i can see it would be so warmand lovely one if it goes as it should be

SPEECHLESS

I really can’t extend my deepest gratitude for those lines which

Will engraved deep in my memories,

and for her love, it will go as it should be

Aregatow gozimasta

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Do your Best

Otosa ^^

Thanks for the nice one , I've really enjoyed it

until we meet again

good luck^_^

Azuma[

I’ll certainty do onee chan

Its been an honor reading your comment

Thanks sis

U made me happy

btw the photo isn't shown to me

[Harry Potter]

I'm impressed, soooo nice words

[محترف]

Psst
ya hear that
it's a topic . let's read it

to tell ya the truth
that was so fantastic
combination of a confession & emotions
how cool is that people
I like to read what comes from the heart clearly

Backstabbers & human eaters,

They killed my spirit & change my behavior.

so epic man XD

C’mon, just smile I’m one crazy Lad,
Which gonna be a brilliant dad

that's what I call
A Perfect ending

it was nice to read it all in a short time
and remember

A late comeback
brings the smack

[lolleta]

hi Abu Layan san
i can't beleive
u r a father ?? !! o
oh.... no ... it is big surprise
***
in the biggining .. while reading ur poem
i felt that u talking about something precious
but ... i'm was surprised when i recognized that
u mean ur doughter ... wow

***
Congratulation dady
i came to make ur life beautiful
to be with u always
so u wont feel alone ever

dady
love me and care for me
i'm a precious gift from Allah
so dont lose me

give me a big hug full of compassion & safty
let me feel warm between ur hands
i love u and mamy

love me
love me
love me
...
..
.
Layan saying
^_^

Walking beyond the lines of history
Where I saw my pathetic misery,

Found the some dusty memories,
Reading them and see my enemies,

Backstabbers & human eaters,

They killed my spirit & change my behavior

oh no .. how hard ur life before she come

it is like our lives now...
no smile no happeness ... no comfort
it's really boring and dark
....

Saw her smile, pretty and cute,

Even she makes the whole world mute.

Donno what happened, but I felt some passion
Just for her which turn me in her lovely mansion

Now, I’m gazing at her tremendous way
By every single moment we play,

Don’t blame me coz I’m writing this down
And start calling me a rookie clown

but what i see here

someone whom will fly from happiness
that's sooooo greaaaaaaaaat

may Allah save her
and make her wonder girl
to be smily dad forever

C’mon, just smile I’m one crazy Lad,
Which gonna be a brilliant dad

i think she's a lucky girl
cuz she has a father like u
mmm .. actually.. i don' know who is the lucky
???
maybe both

>>
it was great poem really
save it until she become bigger
to read it
i think she will love u more and more

sorry for long comment
but i'm really happy like u but more

plz .. kiss her from her cute cheek
and tell her it is from ur onni lolleta

cya

[Do Ri Me]

hi Assissan
how are you

yatta ... so now Layan is the one who take you from us
but we can forgive her ... 'b-coz she the one who gives you this flash to write wonderful words

thanks brother for those touching words ...
and we hope to so
to live that felling of holding our kids
in sha'a Allah
***

[maxman1991]

Welcome bro

how r u??

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Nice words ... it`s really nice how you turning from speaking about days
to speaking about your daughter
--

Walking beyond the lines of history
Where I saw my pathetic misery,

Found the some dusty memories,
Reading them and see my enemies,

Backstabbers & human eaters,
They killed my spirit & change my behavior.

Making me strong, and realizing that,
I need to be wise and freely act,

seemed lost ... but sure that`s someday you find your light
seemed tired ... but ready to fight more
seemed thirsty >>>no I`m just kidding I`m the one whose thirsty

--

Going back to the unknown thing,
I sensed her; I felt I’m the king,

Saw her smile, pretty and cute,
Even she makes the whole world mute.

Donno what happened, but I felt some passion
Just for her which turn me in her lovely mansion

Now, I’m gazing at her tremendous way
By every single moment we play,

ah kids... you think you save them ...but they who make us felt safe
it`s soooo cute ... I like this part a lot specially this one

I sensed her; I felt I’m the king

how much it nice

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Don’t blame me coz I’m writing this down
And start calling me a rookie clown

One day you’ll know what I’m talking about
Coz there is no doubt, even if I shout

And say extra-loudly Layan
You will be my girl if I can, hold u more than,

Hundred years and more couple of weeks,
So that we could stay together so I don’t be geek,

C’mon, just smile I’m one crazy Lad,
Which gonna be a brilliant dad

no one can ever blame you ... smile of a child worth the world
specially when be yours.

--
Allah save her for you and save you for her

happy day

[Rainbow Star]

WOW
you're a daddy
how cute

I bet you'll be a great one

the poem is soooooooooo sweet
I loved it
it shows great emotions although you are "assassin" ooh
hee hee

great words really
I loved the way you made me read it without even blinking
I was like O_O until the end
it touched me
thanks a lot
I think this is the second topic I read for you since I came here

...

you lazy old dad
LOL
...
c ya