llllll In there you'll always be llllll

[mohbaboo]

This one is dedicated to my best friend
May Allah have mercy on his soul







when I walk down the street
I see lovely faces everywhere
putting that smiley face
not knowing what's in down here




here in my heart
all this ache and rust
from all those who betrayed
this heart day after another




how can I say it?l
there's no word to describe it
should I say broken?l
or just shattered?l




lovely faces everywhere
making jokes all the time
sometimes they're stupid
and sometimes senseless




except for that one!l
who had the same face as I do
the tortured soul's face
the broken heart's soul





we had it from everyone else
we wanted to scream against 'em
shouting with everything we got
"you can't feel us!"l




you IDIOTS!l

tears
and
tears
and
tears





I hate those superficial people
or shall I say heartless
but, I don't care
as long as I have that one
or had!l



the one who shared me his pain
and to whom mine was shared to
I'll never forget you
I'll always remember you




even when you're down there
underneath the soil of the ground
rest in peace my friend
you'll always be there

in
my HEART

[~ saya ~]

Thanks^ـ^
keep on
see ya

[luffy chan]

thank you
that was amzing mohbaboo san

I jealous you]you can write beautiful

see you

[mohbaboo]

Thanks^ـ^
keep on
see ya

hey dear Saya chan
you're welcome
and thank you for passing by

see ya
peace

thank you
that was amzing mohbaboo san

I jealous you]you can write beautiful

see you

you're welcome dear brother

thank you and appreciate your coment

bye

[Gol D Roger !]

better words

thanks my mister

best wishes ~

[mohbaboo]

better words

thanks my mister

best wishes ~

thank you
I'm glad you liked it

peace

[Sugar Luxe]

This is sincerely beautiful
the words are so deep and magnifical

I'm definitely a fan of your poetry

And I'm sorry about your friend, May he rest in peace.

[mohbaboo]

This is sincerely beautiful
the words are so deep and magnifical

I'm definitely a fan of your poetry

And I'm sorry about your friend, May he rest in peace.

I gladly appreciate your sincere and heart healing comment

and it's my honor to have a wonderful fan as you

I really hope that you'll be here with us
and maybe share with us some of your writings

nice to see you here
peace

[I LOVE JORDAN]

This one is dedicated to my best friend
May Allah have mercy on his soul

Firstly... the greeting of Islam ... peace be upon you
and may Allah forgive your friend
and all Muslims around the world...

when I walk down the street
I see lovely faces everywhere
putting that smiley face
not knowing what's in down here

These are our words ... full of sensitivities ... when we feel them
really beautiful words .... in spite of their great sadness ...

lovely faces everywhere
making jokes all the time
sometimes they're stupid
and sometimes senseless

So hard situation ... it hurts much

but maybe it is the only thing you have when he pass away

the memories ...

you IDIOTS!l

tears
and
tears
and
tears

(idiots, tears - together ? hmmm) I think that they have secret meaning ... maybe

I don't understand them as it should be ... i guess you meant that your friend deserve more than these tears

OK>>> this is make them A M A Z I N G

I hate those superficial people

me too

as long as I have that one
or had!
l

no no >>> say you always have , not you had >>> at least in yours

the one who shared me his pain
and to whom mine was shared to
I'll never forget you
I'll always remember you




even when you're down there
underneath the soil of the ground
rest in peace my friend
you'll always be there

in
my HEART

i do not know what should i say ... after all these affective words

it has been a long time since i have read such a powerful words

but really you have a creative way of writing

you described a great amount of sorrow in some briefed phrases

i wish you success at another writings ... keep on writing

I feel your words >>> that's why i tried to comment on every phrase ... but i failed

and excuse me for my big mistakes ... i am not expert in English



THANKS A LOT

[m.j.j]

Thank u very much
its amazing topic

[Anno.Sola]

alslam 3licom wa rahmato allah wa brakatoh

friendship is very nice ..

sometimes its make you feel " soOo happy "

but what i saw behind your words

more than it

that's the life ,

but you should be strong like i saw now

may Allah have mercy on his soul

I welly happy of your patient : )

May Allah be with you

good luck







.




.

[mohbaboo]

Firstly... the greeting of Islam ... peace be upon you
and may Allah forgive your friend
and all Muslims around the world...

peace be upon you, too

Amen
thank you very much

(idiots, tears - together ? hmmm) I think that they have secret meaning ... maybe

I don't understand them as it should be ... i guess you meant that your friend deserve more than these tears

OK>>> this is make them A M A Z I N G

IDIOTS
is when I cried at those people - the superficial with the smiley faces

I called them idiots and I went crying
they are the idiots and I am the one who is crying- I hope you get it now ^_^l


no no >>> say you always have , not you had >>> at least in yours


I had him physically and emotionally

but now all what's left
are the sweet memories

i do not know what should i say ... after all these affective words

it has been a long time since i have read such a powerful words

but really you have a creative way of writing

you described a great amount of sorrow in some briefed phrases

i wish you success at another writings ... keep on writing

I feel your words >>> that's why i tried to comment on every phrase ... but i failed

and excuse me for my big mistakes ... i am not expert in English

that's an honor dear sister

I've been myself and I always be when it comes to writing
what's in my heart comes out to my papers

sure thing
as long as we have those who we love, hate or whatever comes in between
I'll keep writing

you didn't fail at all
my words reached you the way I wanted them to reach you

^_^ we all make mistakes
and we try to learn from them

I just had my long share of time with English

and I would recommend you to read a lot and write at the same time to improve
'cause good writers are good readers

THANKS A LOT

no all the thanks to you
for you beautiful comment
it meant a lot to me

and excuse my very long comment
but I like to write a lot

all the best sister

peace

[mohbaboo]

Thank u very much
its amazing topic

you're welcome
and appreciate your comment here

peace

alslam 3licom wa rahmato allah wa brakatoh

friendship is very nice ..

sometimes its make you feel " soOo happy "

but what i saw behind your words

more than it

that's the life ,

but you should be strong like i saw now

may Allah have mercy on his soul

I welly happy of your patient : )

May Allah be with you

good luck

peace be upon you, too Anno chan

sure
without the friends who we love and share our memories with
life lacks it's flavor and the sweetness

Amen
thank you dear sister for your encouraging words
they worked perfectly l

and be with you as well

thank you very much

peace

[M!ss_KeKo]

Difficult to judge you
You will not liters intimate friend Again
I had a friend Ahbbta a lot, but
Dimension Kaci deprived me of Kieha
Thank you to have prepared me memories

[Schwert]

Hello man, how r u, I'm feeling that I'm late to write this comment but some reasons was the cause of that; u know, you admire me by new wonderful topic again, that's poem is really well-arrange and nice job, may Allah have mercy on ur friend, I'll try to have the beneficial from these are poems may be I'll write something oneday who knows^ ^, I thank u my bro Mohbaboo for this effort and...go on^ ^, see you

[mohbaboo]

Difficult to judge you
You will not liters intimate friend Again
I had a friend Ahbbta a lot, but
Dimension Kaci deprived me of Kieha
Thank you to have prepared me memories

thank you
for your nice words and wisdom

funny language you have loool

peace

Hello man, how r u, I'm feeling that I'm late to write this comment but some reasons was the cause of that; u know, you admire me by new wonderful topic again, that's poem is really well-arrange and nice job, may Allah have mercy on ur friend, I'll try to have the beneficial from these are poems may be I'll write something oneday who knows^ ^, I thank u my bro Mohbaboo for this effort and...go on^ ^, see you

hey brother

no you're not
considering how the English forum is
you know you write something and days pass without any comments

Amen
thank you for your honest feelings
Allah bless you

I'll be waiting for your writings soon hehehe

I thank for supporting me

seeya
peace

[Hajime-san]

hoooos
*
waaaaw it's soooo niiiiiiiice
u're a good writer
keep going bro
u have a special touch in your poems
***
gooooooooooooood luck

Best regards

[pein-killer]

mohahahahha xD

i com from dreams mohahahhah <<< am i scary

so

It will read it later

[mohbaboo]

hoooos
*
waaaaw it's soooo niiiiiiiice
u're a good writer
keep going bro
u have a special touch in your poems
***
gooooooooooooood luck

Best regards

hey
welcome brother

that an honor for me
thank you
I'm really flattered l

good luck to you, too
seeya around

mohahahahha xD

i com from dreams mohahahhah <<< am i scary

so

It will read it later

take your time but don't forget about me looool

[lolowenw]

Mashalla
Its Really Great Words
Specailly
I hate those superficial people)
or shall I say heartless
but, I don't care
as long as I have that one
or had!)l

to those people we should say to them GET LOST from mt life this is what i say to them

I Hope to see more from your Topics

Keep it always up
see you