~ A Moment of Parting ~

[BLaCK-BuLLeT]

In the name of God, Most Gracious, Most Merciful

The most painful thing in this life is farewell..
The most painful word is saying "Gooodbye" to someone you love him..
The most painful moment is "the moment of parting" !!

Last year, I lived that moment more than one time. After that, I wrote a song contain poem about that moments so sadly. I can't forgot those moments until now, when we lose someone we loved him so much. This year, I lived that moment again then remembered that poem again. I'd like to share it with you..

"A Moment of Parting"

The moments of parting..
what is your feeling guys,
when a thing split to two? ?
It's a very hard feeling
like a big injury bleeding!
A moment of parting,
broke my body to parts
A moment of parting,
my heart is suffering too much!
Sorry my dear
I'm a big loser now
Listen my love, ,
that wasn't my choice
to going away,
and leaving you there
I loved you truly,
I loved you so much

Listen to my voice
I miss really!
Listen to a sad scream
that makes a big noise!
Listen to that pen,
which writing too much,
when the talking being so hard
Listen to those sounds,
which came from the near lakes
A tears like rains,
that falls quickly
lakes of tears,
inside my broken heart
I mute those tears
by the walls of my heart
but it surely will be there
like a secret in my heart
I'm trying to be a good example
by being a very coherent
Because if I collapsed
the others will collapsing too

A moment of parting,
a thing split to things
A moment of parting,
broke a body to parts
A moment of parting,
the heart is suffering too much!

Listen to that mouth,
which said: I'm silent
I can't speak now
my tongue freezes!
How can he explain,
'how sad I am'?
How can he express
'how sorry I am'?
Without you now
I feeling my self,
like an old man was lost,
in a giant desert
looking for a river
to drink and rest
how can he live,
all this time alive? ?
the river isn't there
but it is in somewhere
away from the man
the life will so hard
and the pathetic man,
surely he will missing
what makes him alive

A moment of parting,
a thing split to things
A moment of parting,
broke a body to parts
A moment of parting,
the heart is suffering too much!

After the moment of parting
maybe you wondered,
why I am laughing
although you were crying? ?
I'm laughing.. Yeah, , I'm laughing!
You want to know why I was laughing?
I'll tell you why I am laughing,
I'm laughing to hide my weeping!
I weep when the tears are coming
My tears about to fail
in every second or a day
when remembered in it that moments
when I forced to going away
and leaving you there
then miss you so much
like that old desert man

I feeling sad in every time,
I remembered those latest moments
The moments of parting
but at the same time
memories make me so happy
as if we were together..
what ever.. I wish you're fine
your happiness makes me so happy
and sadness makes me so sad!
don't care about me
and take care of yourself please
that is my only request
you're more important
for me and for all those people
who really loved you
keep moving forward
but don't forget me please

A moment of parting

A moment of parting,
when I said 'Bye'
I'll never say 'Goodbye'
Do you know why?
The friends never say
the word which called 'goodbye'
and I looking forward to
that day when I meeting you
a kissing and shaking hands
and saying: I'm very happy now
to seeing you again
that is so right
let's forget all grief
and smiling with all the hope
that the day of happiness
inevitably will come one day
when all wishes fulfilled
to you and me
and everybody we love
Lets try smiling
and try to keep moving
until the friends meet
each other again
imagine with me
how the world can be
with the help of you and me

The period of parting
surely will ending
one day...

Me on poemhunter:
http://www.poemhunter.com/abdurrahman-ruslan/poems/

Best Wishes
Black Bullet

[mirhan]

Peace upon you brother

I'm not a big fan of poetry
but I saw the link in your signature and here I am !

and after reading these lines I have to say that
they are good, pure and touching
and I liked the ending, it reminded me of the quote
" .it's always darkest before the dawn "

After the moment of parting

all you have to do is
" Survive "
after all, the word "parting" is one of the top on my black list :P
and I hope you won't face it too much in your life

and thank you for this topic, and keep your work up

P.s : I didn't realize that your name has been changed
so when I read black bullet, I thought it was a symbol or something
and didn't really get it :P
then I saw your new name in the thanking board
and things started to get clear to me !

[Schwert]

Hallo Brother
I frankly read all ur poem
it is really very good but it expresses sadness
that's its title anyway, sad story of two friends forced to be away from each other, that's the life, you should suffer and can't be escaped from that
I liked the part of an old man in a desert, that was nice expression in your poem and really expressive
generally and no doubt you have the talent of writing but I think you need to develop it a little more and if oyu can have a look at englisch literature poems, I think it probably encourages you and there may be becomes a challenge between you and that kind of art
I'd thank you for ur a piece of art who you presented here and wish for you the best and also get a meeting with the absence dear; )1

[BLaCK-BuLLeT]

Thank you very much mirhan, Schwert for your interaction and thoughts =)

Best Wishes
BLaCK-BuLLeT