][ To Where The Bad Freinds Will Lead You ][

[vampire hunter]

أهلاً بكم جميعا .

طبعاً هذه قصة بالإنجليزى ، القصة من تأليفى بالكامل لذا يمنع منعاً باتاً أن يتم نقلها .

معلومات بسيطة:
1- القصة ليس لها أى علاقة بحياتى الحقيقة .
2- السبب فى وضع القصة فى منتدى قلم الأعضاء هو إنى وجدته أنسب لمكانها فالقصة أقرب للموعظة من أن تكون قصة إنجليزية .
3- تعمدت إستخدام الكلمات البسيطة فى كل القصة و ذلك حتى يتسنى للجميع فهمها .

الكلام الموجود قبل العنوان ما هو إلا مقدمة قصيرة .

Before the beginning you have to know that this story is not a true story.I made it up and the characters either. The main character is me. There are no names in the story. So let’s begin the story.

To Where The Bad Friends Will Lead You?!!

My story began when I was a kid. I guess I was 15 by that time. Anyway, my father had a dangerous situation of cancer. So I had to take him to the hospital because I was his only child. When we reached the hospital I was shouting for help suddenly I saw a doctor looks familiar to me. How did I forget that: he was my father’s old friend. The doctor took my father inside the hospital. After two hours the doctor came to me and said “I am so sorry to say this but your father may die during two weeks may be more or less, only God knows I am really sorry”. I did not believe what I had heard. The doctor’s words stayed on my mind for a very long time. I did not know what to do: should I go back home and tell my mother about this or should I keep it as a secret. In the end I decided to keep it as a secret because I did not know how would my mother act if she knew. However I went back home and told my mother that my father was ill and he was going to stay in the hospital for a couple of weeks. This two weeks passed as if they were two years.

In the last day of the two weeks I went to the hospital to check on my father. When I arrived I saw a lot of people outside my father’s room. When I asked for the reason the answer was the thing I did fear the most. They told me “may Allah (God) have mercy on your father’s soul”. It was a few seconds before I fell onto the ground. I stand up again after a few seconds and entered my father’s to see him for the last time even if he was dead. Two minutes after I saw my mother coming and she looked to me with a crying face and asked “why did not you tell me about this before, why?” . I never answered that question. After my father’s death every thing was changed: my mother had a shock and she stopped talking to anyone even me. I was changed into a bad person. The reason was some bad young men. I did meet them in the high school. They were too bad, they were smoking, hading drugs and they even go to the night clubs. I am not going to lay to you I was doing the same things. You may wonder from where I did get money? I forget to tell you that my father was a rich man. He had a big company which was given to my uncle because my father had written this in his will. So I was hading 10 thousand riyals per month. This amount of money was enough to make me do what I wanted to do.

Me and the gang were known as drugs dealers in the high school, I had stayed in this bad situation for the whole high school but when I finished it I woke up. The only reason was that I had found myself in the street with the gang members but our classmates had gone to universities. It was a short time before I back to the gang again. But this time I was more badness. I continued in this way for a very long time. I was the leader of the gang because I was the one who had the money, cars and everything the gang might need. That meant I was the one who pay for cigarettes, drugs and wine.

At the age of 25 I returned to who I was when my father was alive. That meant I had returned to the right path. The reason that made me return was what had happened in one night. In this night I had given some money to one of the gang members to buy us some drugs. On his way back to the car a terrible accident had happened: a car came out from middle of nowhere and hit him. We put him into the car and we were about to take him to the hospital but he said “stop the car I want to tell you something” so the car had stopped. Then he said “we had been doing bad things for many years, it is time to stop and return to our God and ask God for forgiveness” then he breathed his last breathe. His words were too enough to wake us up from the life which we had been living in. However, after my return, my mother became the mother that I had known once. When I was 26 years old I married to a good woman that my mother had chosen for me. After that, when I was 29 years old I had finished my studies in a private university and became a great engineer. When I was 31 years old I own my father’s company. Now I am living with my wife and two children a girl and a boy. But I will never forget what had happened to me when I was in the high school. In the end I have a small advice for every student in the high school “good friends are like the stars. You do not always see them but you always know that they are there.”

فى الأخير أتمنى أن تكون نالت القصة إعجابكم .

و من لديه تعليق فأهلاً و مرحباً به .

written by : vampire hunter

Behold The Next story ترقبوا القصة القادمة بإذن الله

[وحي القلم]

Awesome

I liked it,,
it's simple,realistic and good written story

thank you very much..bro
and
Regards


كنت هنا،،( I have been here)

[miss coctail]

القصة مررررة روعة

صح إنو جاتني بعض الكلمات إللي فهمتها بعد قراءة الجملة كاملة

لكن صراحة إبداااع

وعلى قولتك فيها موعظة

وفكرتني بتصميم مرة سويتو وحطيتو برضو في المنتدى هنا

وشكرا على عرضها ^^

[Kind Heart]

Really, this story is very ,very and very nice..

Thanks so much my brother

I am very happy to read it

see ya..

[البدر المنير]

وعليكم السلام
أفضل لو كانت القصة
مترجمة إلى اللغة العربية
مع وجود النص الأصلي
حتى يتسنى للجميع " وأنا منهم "
فهم مقصد القصة فكما تعلم
هذا المنتدى باللغة العربية ،
أتطلع لجوابك ^ ــــ ^

[vampire hunter]

Awesome

I liked it,,
it's simple,realistic and good written story

thank you very much..bro
and
Regards


كنت هنا،،( I have been here)

أهلاً أخى وحى القلم .

كم أسعدنى مرورك الطيب على الموضوع .

شكراً لك على ردك و على إطراك الرائع .

القصة مررررة روعة

صح إنو جاتني بعض الكلمات إللي فهمتها بعد قراءة الجملة كاملة

لكن صراحة إبداااع

وعلى قولتك فيها موعظة

وفكرتني بتصميم مرة سويتو وحطيتو برضو في المنتدى هنا

وشكرا على عرضها ^^

أهلاً بكى أختى .

شكراً لكِ على مرورك و العفو .

Really, this story is very ,very and very nice..

Thanks so much my brother

I am very happy to read it

see ya..

أولاً شكراً لكى أختى على مروركِ و العفو .

ثانياً كم أسعدنى أن القصة نالت إعجابكِ .

وعليكم السلام
أفضل لو كانت القصة
مترجمة إلى اللغة العربية
مع وجود النص الأصلي
حتى يتسنى للجميع " وأنا منهم "
فهم مقصد القصة فكما تعلم
هذا المنتدى باللغة العربية ،
أتطلع لجوابك ^ ــــ ^

أهلاً بك أخى .

الحقيقة لن أستطيع ترجمتها إلى العربية و ذلك لأن الترجمة الحرفية سوف تغير القصة نهائياً .

أى أننى إذا أردت أن أكتبها بالعربى سوف يكون وكأنى أكتب قصة أخرى من جديد .

[~ MissCloud ~]

اولا اشكر لك اخي مشاركتنا هذه القصة..ولي تعليق على بعض الاشياء..

فارجو ان تتقبلها وااسف للإزعـــاج..


اولا: من اهم اسباب السرطان cansers والعياذ بالله التدخين..فإذا كان هذا سبب وفاة الوالد اماكان سببا كافيا لاتعاظ ابنه..

ثانيا : كنت افضل لو اجلت موت الوالد بعد الاسبوعين يوم او يومين حتى لا يبدو ان ماقاله الطبيب صحيح تماما..بل تقديرا..وحتى لايظن الناس غير ان "الاعمار بيد الله"


اخيرا اعتذر بشدة على الازعاج ..واتمنى ان حضرتك تتقبل رأيي

اخيرا القصة رائعة والعظة خطيرة واللغة قوية

فجزاك الله خيـرا..

والسلام عليــــــكم

[vampire hunter]

اولا اشكر لك اخي مشاركتنا هذه القصة..ولي تعليق على بعض الاشياء..

فارجو ان تتقبلها وااسف للإزعـــاج..


اولا: من اهم اسباب السرطان cansers والعياذ بالله التدخين..فإذا كان هذا سبب وفاة الوالد اماكان سببا كافيا لاتعاظ ابنه..

ثانيا : كنت افضل لو اجلت موت الوالد بعد الاسبوعين يوم او يومين حتى لا يبدو ان ماقاله الطبيب صحيح تماما..بل تقديرا..وحتى لايظن الناس غير ان "الاعمار بيد الله"


اخيرا اعتذر بشدة على الازعاج ..واتمنى ان حضرتك تتقبل رأيي

اخيرا القصة رائعة والعظة خطيرة واللغة قوية

فجزاك الله خيـرا..

والسلام عليــــــكم

أهلاً بكى أختى .

لم يزعجنى مروركِ بل على العكس لقد زادنى سعادة .

شكراً لكى على المرور و العفو .

إجابة على الملاحظات التى ذكرتيها :

اولا: من اهم اسباب السرطان cansers والعياذ بالله التدخين..فإذا كان هذا سبب وفاة الوالد اماكان سببا كافيا لاتعاظ ابنه..

ليس شرط أختى أن يكون سبب السرطان هو التدخين فكم من البشر فى هذا العالم يأتيهم السرطان و هم غيروا مدخنين فأسباب السرطان عديدة و كثيرة .

ثانيا : كنت افضل لو اجلت موت الوالد بعد الاسبوعين يوم او يومين حتى لا يبدو ان ماقاله الطبيب صحيح تماما..بل تقديرا..وحتى لايظن الناس غير ان "الاعمار بيد الله"

و لكن هذا هو المذكور فى القصة :

“I am so sorry to say this but your father may die during two weeks may be more or less, only God knows I am really sorry”

معنى العبارة :والدك إحتمال يموت خلال أسبوعين ربما أكثر ربما أقل ، الله هو فقط من يعلم .

كما أن إستخدام كلمة may يعنى عدم التأكد أى توقع حدوث الشيئ بنسبة قليلة جداً و إستخدام كلمة during يعنى خلال أي أن الدكتور غير متأكد نهائياً و بقية الجملة تدل على ذلك فقد قال : الله أعلم .

إذا كنت أريد التأكيد كنت إستخدمت الجملة : your father will die .

و معناها والدك سوف يموت .

فى الأخير شكراً لكى أختى على تعليقاتكِ و ملاحظاتكِ .

و السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته .

[-اكاي-]

شكراً لك على القصه الراااااااااااااااااااااااااائعه

[paradoxe]

thank you for the story .. it's really good one .. ur English is simple & clear ,, I understand it well & learn from it too .. the point of this story is good too.. so keep on writing simple stories .. u r doing well in it ^^

ur sis / paradoxe

[DEMON FOX]

شكرا على القصه الحلوة
وبانتظار القصه الجايه ان شاء الله
امنياتي لك بالتوفيق

[rule of rose]

مشكور على القصة
رائعة جداً وفيها موعظة
فكرتها البسيطة وكلماتها ايضاً ...اعطيت معنى جميل في قصة قصيرة
ننتظر المزيد من الابداعات
بالمناسبة تمنيت لو كتبت كلمة الله حرفياً بدلGod
لقد سمعت انه لا يجوز ترجمة اسم الله ...من ناحية اخرى معناها اله وليس الله .. وهم لايقصدون بها الله في معظم الاوقات... حسناً نقدي بلا معنى تقريباً ^^
ميرسي على القصة للمرة الثانية
والسلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
اختك رول اوف روز

[vampire hunter]

شكراً لك على القصه الراااااااااااااااااااااااااائعه

شكراًلك على المرور أخى العزيز و العفو .

thank you for the story .. it's really good one .. ur English is simple & clear ,, I understand it well & learn from it too .. the point of this story is good too.. so keep on writing simple stories .. u r doing well in it ^^

ur sis / paradoxe

أهلاً بكى أختى .

شكراً لك على ردك و عفواً .

شكرا على القصه الحلوة
وبانتظار القصه الجايه ان شاء الله
امنياتي لك بالتوفيق

أهلاً و سهلاً أخى .

العفو أخى و القصة القادمة فى الغالب سوف تكون فى الإجازة بسبب الإنشغال .

مشكور على القصة
رائعة جداً وفيها موعظة
فكرتها البسيطة وكلماتها ايضاً ...اعطيت معنى جميل في قصة قصيرة
ننتظر المزيد من الابداعات
بالمناسبة تمنيت لو كتبت كلمة الله حرفياً بدلGod
لقد سمعت انه لا يجوز ترجمة اسم الله ...من ناحية اخرى معناها اله وليس الله .. وهم لايقصدون بها الله في معظم الاوقات... حسناً نقدي بلا معنى تقريباً ^^
ميرسي على القصة للمرة الثانية
والسلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
اختك رول اوف روز

أهلاً أختى .

عفواً أختى و شكراً على الملاحظة و تم التعديل .

[The Rock 1993]

thank you vampire hunter thank you

[dallo]

hey vampire hunter

i really like ur story its so great mashallah

keep going bro >> ur doing great

thaanx again

Jana

[kyto kid]

Hey vampire hunter i will read ur story so wait for me and for my comment

ok why u dont put ur story in English forume "department"in msoms coz members of english forume will enjoy it also ,,waiting for ur reply

[kyto kid]

lets see my comment on your story

it was impressive that u dont have any grammatic or spelling mistakes and this really surprised me

you use simple english words for every one to understand and at the same time you make a wonderful story

you make the story as a memory and you acheived it in using past simple in grammer

u used in the memory the charectristic of flash back as telling us past events during telling us the certain story and really i loved this way

the idea of the story and the benefit from it was really great

as amedical student i really like using may with death as there is no certain of it and you have done it well

return to the this part of story
this night I had given some money to one of the gang members to buy us some drugs. On his way back to the car a terrible accident had happened: a car came out from middle of nowhere and hit him. We put him into the car and we were about to take him to the hospital but he said “stop the car I want to tell you something” so the car had stopped. Then he said “we had been doing bad things for many years, it is time to stop and return to our God and ask God for forgiveness” then he breathed his last breathe.

i think u quote this part of story from egyptian movie

but really may be it just similar but please dont think that it is accusation coz there is no shame if u have done quote in small part of story coz really i love this story so much and words cant tell you my great thanks to u -flowers0" class="inlineimg" />

i hope u like my comment

oh really i reapeat my reaquest to put it in english forume

and could u read my stroy in english forume and tell me you opinion about it

it is bad in grammer and
spelling but i hope you will enjoy it -flowers0" class="inlineimg" />

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