Rollin' Down

[the Assassin]

wassap boys and girls, hope u a nice summer>>cut the crap

anyways, today i was ryhming, and i dedicade this to my beatiful princess
(my wife )

whatever, bring up ur bob-corn and read
cos i broghut mine

cos i ain't give nobody
LoooooooooL XD
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Going back when I was crumbling
Where I saw my self mumbling
Screaming to anonymous fellow
Waiting to get just one hello

Going back to have deep look into myself
Where she was looking into my shelf
Screaming to the lord to have one last call
Waiting to have a Mysterious thing to fall

Going back to find her remarkable leap
Where she left my bleeding heart seep
Screaming to find one good reason
Waiting to another sorrowful season

No place that I’m able to go
Even though I have so much pain to show
Picture me as a golden star rolling
Taking the rest of what I’ve befallen

No place would never ever behold
Even though all melting isn’t gold
Picture me as a collapse empire
Taking the rest of what the king desire

No place would accept my pain
Even though dudes call me insane
Picture my pain running 24-7
Taking the rest, and nothing is coming

Going to where, screaming to there, waiting right here, no thanks sir…
No places to go, even though, picture me so, taking me too…

C-jay 4 eva
the assassin

[مرآة الأحلام]

what a nice ryhme i like it you are talent writer

[mis eima]

this is very hard language
you're talking like a gangster
after a big help from my brother cos he is gangster 4life too
i finally got it
it's nice rhyme
keep up your rhyming
by the way my brother liked you

[your leader]

that was awesome dude!
i brought my popcorn ,large Soda and enjoyed reading your thread...
thanks bro

[dallo]

what a great rhyme keeeep going

[the Assassin]

what a nice ryhme i like it you are talent writer

yari-yari
arigato for your comment
it was cool enough 4 me
thank u ....
but i wish that u could exprese more and more
cos when i write something i excpect form you to read
and have some comments for the words above
And ariagot for the
nice compliment

[your leader]

Ok, You Got me bro I like to read poems and anything concerned with poetry
I'll come back with my comments,soon, In sha Allah. But it would take time cuz I'm so so busy >>>>you just can't imagine,bro!
please accept my regards for NOW...

[the Assassin]

this is very hard language
you're talking like a gangster
after a big help from my brother cos he is gangster 4life too
i finally got it
it's nice rhyme
keep up your rhyming
by the way my brother liked you

mis eima
wassap sis..

nice to see a golden reply form a golden memeber
arigatow for the complement
anyway ... this is ain't a gang language
this a poem
BUT
im a gang too
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hehe
you better watch your back
haha or i'll bring my gunz
loooooooooooooooooolZ

whatever, lets stop joking and be
serious
...
when u want to understand
and write like what i've made...
try to write lines end with the same
letter
LIKE
i know what i said
and what he maid
OR
can we go
to the show
death row
what they saw
or bring the bow
its between me and you
...
see this what i meant
after that put ur inspration
like write about love
or hate or anything u want
but make sure to follow the sequance
and step by step to the top

[Gentle Fist]

it's called a poem for god's sake !!

but it's nice I'll correct the grammar and spelling mistakes once I can
XD

[Gentle Fist]

wassap boys and girls, hope u a nice summer>>cut the crap

anyways, today i was rhyming, and i dedicade this to my beatiful princess
( writing not rhyming )
( and rhyming not ryhming )
( Dedicate not Dedicade )
(beautiful not beatiful )
(my wife )

whatever, bring up ur bob-corn and read
cos i broghut mine
(popcorn not bob-corn)
(brought not broghut)

cos i ain't give nobody
( I ain't gonna give anybody)
LoooooooooL XD
-------------------

Going back when I was crumbling
Where I saw my self mumbling
Screaming to anonymous fellow
Waiting to get just one hello

Going back to have deep look into myself
Where she was looking into my shelf
Screaming to the lord to have one last call
Waiting to have a Mysterious thing to fall

Going back to find her remarkable leap
Where she left my bleeding heart seep
Screaming to find one good reason
Waiting to another sorrowful season

No place that I’m able to go
Even though I have so much pain to show
Picture me as a golden star rolling
Taking the rest of what I’ve befallen

No place would never ever behold
Even though all melting isn’t gold
Picture me as a collapse empire
Taking the rest of what the king desire

No place would accept my pain
Even though dudes call me insane
Picture my pain running 24-7
Taking the rest, and nothing is coming

Going to where, screaming to there, waiting right here, no thanks sir…
No places to go, even though, picture me so, taking me too…

C-jay 4 eva
the assassin

thats all I dun wanna ruin yr poem ^_^ and it's nice ty Assassin

[the Assassin]

that was awesome dude!
i brought my popcorn ,large Soda and enjoyed reading your thread...
thanks bro

Dude
nice to have u around
and its been a great to
eat some pop-corn during the show
hehe

anyway hope u a good summer
and enjoy ur Soda
looooooooooooooooooooooools
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[the Assassin]

what a great rhyme keeeep going

i'm gonna keep going
and thanks for the inspration
which makes the human
go beyond his imaginations
Arigatow

[the Assassin]

Ok, You Got me bro I like to read poems and anything concerned with poetry
I'll come back with my comments,soon, In sha Allah. But it would take time cuz I'm so so busy >>>>you just can't imagine,bro!
please accept my regards for NOW...

yari .. yari
i can't wait to see ur comment
(if u need some help just click ur fingers)

[the Assassin]

it's called a poem for god's sake !!

but it's nice I'll correct the grammar and spelling mistakes once I can
XD

thank u pal for passing by
and we've been through it

[the Assassin]

thats all I dun wanna ruin yr poem ^_^ and it's nice ty Assassin

Dude WTH
SPLELLING
i really hate it
and grammer too

Damn pal

hehe
thank u for correcting my topic

[Gentle Fist]

and yeah yeah

Your Poem is awesome

Filled with emotions
XD

I really like it ><<< Just cuzz the war is over XD I am kidding >>,<<

>.<

^____________________________^

[the Assassin]

T_T
the war has been ended
OMG
i wanna kill somebody
looooooooooooooooools
^ . ^
thank u gentile for ur passing
loooooooooooooooooooooolz\