How to write a nice organized poem
in the name of god most gracious most merciful
then ...
I have noticed some potential in our msomsians in POETRY
so I am gonna teach yo the basics i writing a poem :
Well there are 2 types
The first type ( 2 rhymes 1 chapter )
well this type needs less time and it is much easier
because you will have 2 rhymes in 1 chapter
Example :
The Words penetrate
into every body's soul
and with me you always manipulate
Stop that I am not your Doll
Example End
you see this is 1 chapter and I had 2 rhymes in it
Rules :
1) ORDER !! : do not mix the rhymes have them organized
2) beauty of the words and meaning : well this is a rule that every poet should follow
PS : the ending should rhyme in sounds not spelling !! we see many people think that we should rhyme the spelling NO !! you see the words Soul and doll not the same spelling ends but the same sound ending ^_^
The Second type ( 1 rhyme per chapter )
in this type you gotta follow one rhyme per chapter and you may change the sub topic in the next chapter because the poem is not connected but you can not change dynamically like moving from nature to love NO !!
Rules :
1) you can change the rhyme each chapter only
2) you can change the sub topic each chapter
3) if you ended a rhyme you do not return to it
those are the most important things in poetry !!
* I may post an example later *
How to ??
1) set a main topic in your head
2) write the first line freely
* the next move varies in each type *
3A ) you can write the next line freely
3B) look for words tat rhymes with the Ending of your last word in the previous line
4) keep the meaning clear
5) use beautiful words* this will attract people to your poem *
6) DO not differ in each line length a lot
Well this is what do I have to say
Well I w8 your first poems !
8wq4
I might post one here XD
Thanks for reading Uncle Gentle Fist
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THankie
you took your revenge I will review it myself because I type tooo fast '
and I can't check because I type too fast ok thankie !!
and about the types these are the basics
after these 2
comes the ones mentions in article
alright bye bye
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة the Assassin
Yari ... Yari...
Look who is here ... Bernard Show
hohohoho
wassap mate...
as u said u gonna teach us how to write a poem
Well.. lets start
When we start a topic we say
in the name of Allah most gracious most merciful
Cos we don't write god with small letter
b-cos when we write it this way
then its like we obey more than one god
we just only write it like
God
cos we reffer ( rifer) to one God which is Allah
if u ask me from where i picked this info
i'll say its from my teacher
where i really learned english( English )...
we don't say it like u said it...
( mmmm the god here is Allah and about the capital My bad )
either we say
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics to write a poem
or
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics how to write a poem
( it is I'm gonna teach you the basics of writing a poem )
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...I think there is a lil bit misunderstanding
cos u've read
this rhyme once upon a time
No place that I’m able to go
Even though I have so much pain to show
Picture me as a golden star rolling
Taking the rest of what I’ve befallen
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No place would accept my pain
Even though dudes call me insane
Picture my pain running 24-7
Taking the rest, and nothing is coming
I think u've seen it somewhere
hehe...
i think go and show are not the same spelling
Same as
Rolling.. Beffallen
Pain.. insaine
..coming.. 24-7
hehe nice try pal..
but if u read it so well
u can make sure of the letter
and how its pronounced
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errr ..... didn't I say that the spelling endings doesn't count ?!
and it's how we pronounce it what matters ??
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U have a nice rule
huh
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...
let me give u a hint...
do u know what hip-hop or rap
is all about...
either poems or rhymes...
if u don't know nothing about'em
i think u should read this articl
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Types of Rhyme
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Have a good night mr-Master English ( err after mister you must type a dot )
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and pls start with types of Rhyme to see what
rhymes is all about
so
As u said
NO HARD FEELINGS
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Peace out
h3h3
errrr
I am gonna correct your correcting ok ?!
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I am bored you win I dont want you to read your reply though >.<
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continue bro. even If u faced someone try to correct ur languge .. I know u feel down b-coz of him but remember that he's gonna correct ur mistake to be the best.
come on .. I wanna try to love the poems and how can I disscs them esaily
the poems make me sick loOoOol
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اقتباس:
continue bro. even If u faced someone try to correct ur languge .. I know u feel down b-coz of him but remember that he's gonna correct ur mistake to be the best.
come on .. I wanna try to love the poems and how can I disscs them esaily
the poems make me sick loOoOol
YARI .. YARI
bro u misunderstand the whole thing
67_icond
cos we've been challinging
to flame the forum
as u see the forum
is kinda sleepy
zzz
we have to get it awaken
iCon944
anyway
its cool that u adimre poems
but keep going
Handsome988
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loool ok if it's just challing :)
dai jo bo ni -san
ah by the way .. I'm Girl ^_^
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Why ?!! XD
anyways thanks for passing I guess >.<
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اقتباس:
loool ok if it's just challing :)
اقتباس:
dai jo bo ni -san
ah by the way .. I'm Girl ^_^
WTH
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My bad
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anyways dear darling
so sorry for the misunderstanding
and BTW
take this as an apologie
When i called her bro
she refliect what was though
sweetness and admiration
which makes me in a bad situation
so sorry
