How to write a nice organized poem

[the Assassin]

Yari ... Yari...
Look who is here ... Bernard Show
hohohoho
wassap mate...
as u said u gonna teach us how to write a poem
Well.. lets start

in the name of god most gracious most merciful
then

When we start a topic we say
in the name of Allah most gracious most merciful
Cos we don't write god with small letter
b-cos when we write it this way
then its like we obey more than one god
we just only write it like
God
cos we reffer to one God which is Allah
if u ask me from where i picked this info
i'll say its from my teacher
where i really learned english...

so I am gonna teach yo the basics i writing a poem

we don't say it like u said it...

either we say
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics to write a poem
or
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics how to write a poem

The Words penetrate
into every body's soul
and with me you always manipulate
Stop that I am not your Doll
Example End
you see this is 1 chapter and I had 2 rhymes in it

...I think there is a lil bit misunderstanding
cos u've read
this rhyme once upon a time

No place that I’m able to go
Even though I have so much pain to show
Picture me as a golden star rolling
Taking the rest of what I’ve befallen
------

No place would accept my pain

Even though dudes call me insane

Picture my pain running 24-7

Taking the rest, and nothing is coming

I think u've seen it somewhere

PS : the ending should rhyme in sounds not spelling !! we see many people think that we should rhyme the spelling NO !! you see the words Soul and doll not the same spelling ends but the same sound ending ^_^

hehe...

i think go and show are not the same spelling

Same as

Rolling.. Beffallen

Pain.. insaine

..coming.. 24-7

hehe nice try pal..

but if u read it so well

u can make sure of the letter

and how its pronounced

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well this is a rule that every poet should follow

U have a nice rule

huh

...
let me give u a hint...
do u know what hip-hop or rap
is all about...
either poems or rhymes...
if u don't know nothing about'em
i think u should read this articl
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Types of Rhyme
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Have a good night mr-Master English

and pls start with types of Rhyme to see what
rhymes is all about
so
As u said
NO HARD FEELINGS

Peace out
h3h3

[Gentle Fist]

Yari ... Yari...
Look who is here ... Bernard Show
hohohoho
wassap mate...
as u said u gonna teach us how to write a poem
Well.. lets start

When we start a topic we say
in the name of Allah most gracious most merciful
Cos we don't write god with small letter
b-cos when we write it this way
then its like we obey more than one god
we just only write it like
God
cos we reffer ( rifer) to one God which is Allah
if u ask me from where i picked this info
i'll say its from my teacher
where i really learned english( English )...

we don't say it like u said it...

( mmmm the god here is Allah and about the capital My bad )

either we say
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics to write a poem
or
so i'm gonna teach yo the basics how to write a poem

( it is I'm gonna teach you the basics of writing a poem )

...I think there is a lil bit misunderstanding
cos u've read
this rhyme once upon a time

No place that I’m able to go
Even though I have so much pain to show
Picture me as a golden star rolling
Taking the rest of what I’ve befallen
------

No place would accept my pain

Even though dudes call me insane

Picture my pain running 24-7

Taking the rest, and nothing is coming

I think u've seen it somewhere

hehe...

i think go and show are not the same spelling

Same as

Rolling.. Beffallen

Pain.. insaine

..coming.. 24-7

hehe nice try pal..

but if u read it so well

u can make sure of the letter

and how its pronounced

errr ..... didn't I say that the spelling endings doesn't count ?!
and it's how we pronounce it what matters ??
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U have a nice rule

huh

...
let me give u a hint...
do u know what hip-hop or rap
is all about...
either poems or rhymes...
if u don't know nothing about'em
i think u should read this articl
=============
Types of Rhyme
==============
Have a good night mr-Master English ( err after mister you must type a dot )

and pls start with types of Rhyme to see what
rhymes is all about
so
As u said
NO HARD FEELINGS

Peace out
h3h3

errrr

I am gonna correct your correcting ok ?!

[the Assassin]

h3h3h3h3
i think u have something worng...
cos u didn't notice that
this is my habit
and i ain't gon to change it 4 such a person
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and about the correction..
u mintioned that its how to say it at the end
its not how it should be written
cos it has to follow the sequance...
and these types
u've mintioned are types
but u are so confidnt when u said it
they comes after what i have given you...
anyway....
u don't wanna adimt it thats fine...
but at least i proved my point of view
which make ur reaction comes wild...
cos first when i replied to ur topic about bad words
All of a suden u correct some spellings in my topic
and after that u wrote a topic which explane the
great way of writing a poem >>for the reason that u don't want
to admit that its rhyme...
... nice to have u around...
but check ur replies to see that I've made u so angry
anyways.... so long mate...
it was a pricless moments correcting your masterpiece

BTW... i'm sick of such a chit-chat)
cos its not going to end...
anyhow..
as ppl say

(ppl are not what they are appear to be