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hi mina again

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Do Ri Me

i hope you get well soon
شافاك الله و عافاك

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brother sharloc thanx

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ur translation is perfect-like translation and it would be more beautiful if u use

aversion : loathers

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loathers ?
u surely mean : loathe or loathing
( from long man i got their meaning )

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موضوعي الجديد في قلم الأعضاء .

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my new topic at members-pen

you know it's not a sentence at all huhuhuh


mine

أصعب أنواع الفراق ، فراق القلب

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Do Ri Me
by the way from which manga is your signature i feel like i know it but not sure

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really surprised me you notice it as manga not anime
but
coz you are a guy
you " NEED NOT TO KNOW " i hope u got it
^^"

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loathers ?
u surely mean : loathe or loathing
( from long man i got their meaning )

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loathers البُغَضَاءْ
it's a subject

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you know it's not a sentence at all huhuhuh

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i know

^^"

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أصعب أنواع الفراق ، فراق القلب

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the bitter kind of depart is the depart of hearts

and about what u said at the last

need not to know

i like this sentence , said in a lot of detective novels between the police and even in detective conan series

any way as i may not seems so , I am a hardcore manga reader

i get u as i think , it's a shoujo manga as it seems

any way it seems like the drawing of two manga i know because the boy hair is uniqe

sorry for prying and don't worry i need not to know

^^
someone please put a sentence

اذا لم تحقق احلامك فلا تيأس و ابدا من جديد

سهلة مرة ^_^

؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

فاطمة هذا مثال واضح للتورية

the real meaning to this is

i was a lion but some dogs took it after restraining me and i will never regret it

so Sos Chan u wanna try me ok no problem try this one from the same person

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Thanks for the explanation

but you mean "...restraining me, so I will never regret it"?

Because I get it with so not but

Or you mean sth else?

Waiting for your answer

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kakashe

اذا لم تحقق احلامك فلا تيأس و ابدا من جديد

سهلة مرة ^_^

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Whether you didn't achieve your dreams, don't give up and try again.

I hope it is correct

Try this:

قبورنا تُبنى ونحن ما تُبنا، يا ليتنا تُبنا من قبل أن تُبنى.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

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Thanks for the explanation

but you mean "...restraining me, so I will never regret it"?

Because I get it with so not but

Or you mean sth else?

Waiting for your answer

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Fatima u r welcomed

i meant another thing

he doesn't mean so as a result

he means although i was a lion and they were dogs they still took it after restraining me but i will never regret it

after thinking about it u can use but even so i don't regret it and if u wanna know why because i died as lion and they will still live as dogs

وربما لو قرأت البيتين التاليين لها لفهمت معنى البيت السابق :

لا تحسبن برقصها تعلو على أسيادها فالأسد أسدُ و الكلاب كـــلابُ
تبقى الأسـود مخيفة في أسرهــــــــا حتى و إن نبحت عليها كلابُ

poem cant be translated just give up and fatma
when we use whether u must use OR in the sentence
try again

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

Fatima u r welcomed

i meant another thing

he doesn't mean so as a result

he means although i was a lion and they were dogs they still took it after restraining me but i will never regret it

after thinking about it u can use but even so i don't regret it and if u wanna know why because i died as lion and they will still live as dogs

وربما لو قرأت البيتين التاليين لها لفهمت معنى البيت السابق :

لا تحسبن برقصها تعلو على أسيادها فالأسد أسدُ و الكلاب كـــلابُ
تبقى الأسـود مخيفة في أسرهــــــــا حتى و إن نبحت عليها كلابُ

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Aha I get it now, thanks a lot for the clarification

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kakashe

poem cant be translated just give up and fatma

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OH, you mean this sentence is a poem?

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قبورنا تُبنى ونحن ما تُبنا، يا ليتنا تُبنا من قبل أن تُبنى.

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I didn't know that, I'm sorry

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when we use whether u must use OR in the sentence
try again

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Oops yes yes you are right

OH, what a great mistake I made! Thank you so much for the correction

OK, here you are:

If you didn't achieve your dreams, don't give up and try again.

I think now it is correct

في أمان الله

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فاطمة الزهراء

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Oops yes yes you are right

OH, what a great mistake I made! Thank you so much for the correction

OK, here you are:

If you didn't achieve your dreams, don't give up and try again.

I think now it is correct

في أمان الله

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yep its right now
well done
well,we all learn from each other and get benifit
now its ur turn in putting sentence and plz dont put poem
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kakashe

yep its right now
well done
well,we all learn from each other and get benifit
now its ur turn in putting sentence and plz dont put poem
ty

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benefit

OK, don't worry. Here an easy one:

ولأنني مرهقة جدًا بسبب يوم دراسي شاق وجو حار، بدأتُ أخرف قليلًا.

Good luck

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

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and because I am very exhausted due to a hard studying day and very hot one, I started to hallucinate a little

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hi sis how are you
ur sentence can describe me at all the day , but the different thing it's very cold here ... rain and thunder
huhuhuh


mine

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من أصعب المواقف التي قد تواجهك في الحياة ، غدر الصديق !

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

hi sis how are you

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Hi dear sis Do Re Mi ^^

I'm fine and sleepy, too :d

What about you?

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ur sentence can describe me at all the day , but the different thing it's very cold here ... rain and thunder
huhuhuh

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Woow RAIN

^^

It seems we are late lol

جعلها الله أمطار خير وبركة :)

And may Allah help you with your Mid-exams

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and because I am very exhausted due to a hard studying day and very hot one, I started to hallucinate a little

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I think: and a very hot one

Good

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من أصعب المواقف التي قد تواجهك في الحياة ، غدر الصديق !

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How tough thing when your friend becomes a betrayer!

Hmm.. here my translation is so brief ^^"

Waiting for the correction

Mine:

من أهم عناصر تقنية تدوين رؤوس الأقلام، عنصر السماع والتركيز.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

back again

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من أصعب المواقف التي قد تواجهك في الحياة ، غدر الصديق !

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To be betrayed by your friend is one of the difficult situations that you could face in your life

or

The betrayal of a friend is >>>>

in and out

i seem to be late no problem i will do the next one

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من أهم عناصر تقنية تدوين رؤوس الأقلام، عنصر السماع والتركيز.

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listening and concentrating are the most important elements of the headnote writing

سأضع جملة ولم لا ...

غدا يوم الجمعة فلا تنسوا قراءة سورة الكهف ...

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

listening and concentrating are the most important elements of the headnote writing

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Good

But...

Hmm, I said
السماع
not
الاستماع

So, I think we will say:

Hearing and concentrating are the most elements of the headnotes writing.

For this:

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غدا يوم الجمعة فلا تنسوا قراءة سورة الكهف ...

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Remember that tomorrow is Friday. So, don't forget to recite Surat Al-Kahf.

Mine:y

حتى تزداد فعالياتنا في إدارة الوقت، لا نجعل تنظيم الجدول كعائق.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

In order to enhance our efficiency at management time,
we must not make setting up the schedule a barrier


hope it's okay

mine

حمدا لله فقد تمت استعادة النظام من على حافة الانهيار

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

In order to enhance our efficiency at management time,
we must not make setting up the schedule a barrier

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In order to enhance our efficiency in management of time...

As I know we use in instead of at with the verb enhance

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حمدا لله فقد تمت استعادة النظام من على حافة الانهيار

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After the system was on the verge of falling down, it is now back to normal. Praise be to Allah!

I'm sure there are some mistakes ^^"

Waiting for the correction

Try this:

عامل الناس كما تحب أن يعاملوك.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

TREAT OTHERS AS YOU LIKE TO BE TREATED

i hope it's coorect

^__^

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kakashe

TREAT OTHERS AS YOU LIKE TO BE TREATED

i hope it's coorect

^__^

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There is an idiom as a translation of this sentence, which is:

Do as you would be done by.

Now, it is your turn to put a new sentence

في أمان الله ورعايته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فاطمة الزهراء

There is an idiom as a translation of this sentence, which is:

Do as you would be done by.

Now, it is your turn to put a new sentence

في أمان الله ورعايته

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there are alots of idioms sis

but my sentence is correct

^__^

u put a sentence

PLZ

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kakashe

there are alots of idioms sis

but my sentence is correct

^__^

u put a sentence

PLZ

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Yes I know, and I did not say yours is wrong

So, that means your translation is correct

OK, try this:

هذه الإجازة الأسبوعية مليئة بالأشغال؛ لذا لا أضمن لنفسي المشاركة هنا كثيرًا.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

في أمان الله وحفظه