llllll In there you'll always be llllll

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    Thumbs up llllll In there you'll always be llllll


    This one is dedicated to my best friend
    May Allah have mercy on his soul







    when I walk down the street
    I see lovely faces everywhere
    putting that smiley face
    not knowing what's in down here




    here in my heart
    all this ache and rust
    from all those who betrayed
    this heart day after another




    how can I say it?l
    there's no word to describe it
    should I say broken?l
    or just shattered?l




    lovely faces everywhere
    making jokes all the time
    sometimes they're stupid
    and sometimes senseless




    except for that one!l
    who had the same face as I do
    the tortured soul's face
    the broken heart's soul





    we had it from everyone else
    we wanted to scream against 'em
    shouting with everything we got
    "you can't feel us!"l




    you IDIOTS!l

    tears
    and
    tears
    and
    tears





    I hate those superficial people
    or shall I say heartless
    but, I don't care
    as long as I have that one
    or had!l



    the one who shared me his pain
    and to whom mine was shared to
    I'll never forget you
    I'll always remember you




    even when you're down there
    underneath the soil of the ground
    rest in peace my friend
    you'll always be there

    in
    my HEART




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    الصورة الرمزية ~ saya ~

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    Thanks^ـ^
    keep on
    see ya

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    الصورة الرمزية luffy chan

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    thank you
    that was amzing mohbaboo san

    I jealous you]you can write beautiful

    see you

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ~ saya ~ مشاهدة المشاركة
    Thanks^ـ^
    keep on
    see ya
    hey dear Saya chan
    you're welcome
    and thank you for passing by

    see ya
    peace


    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة luffy chan مشاهدة المشاركة
    thank you
    that was amzing mohbaboo san

    I jealous you]you can write beautiful

    see you


    you're welcome dear brother

    thank you and appreciate your coment

    bye




















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    الصورة الرمزية Gol D Roger !

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    better words

    thanks my mister

    best wishes ~


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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kenshiro7 مشاهدة المشاركة
    better words

    thanks my mister

    best wishes ~

    thank you
    I'm glad you liked it

    peace

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    الصورة الرمزية Sugar Luxe

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    This is sincerely beautiful
    the words are so deep and magnifical

    I'm definitely a fan of your poetry

    And I'm sorry about your friend, May he rest in peace.

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Sugar Luxe مشاهدة المشاركة
    This is sincerely beautiful
    the words are so deep and magnifical

    I'm definitely a fan of your poetry

    And I'm sorry about your friend, May he rest in peace.
    I gladly appreciate your sincere and heart healing comment

    and it's my honor to have a wonderful fan as you

    I really hope that you'll be here with us
    and maybe share with us some of your writings

    nice to see you here
    peace

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    الصورة الرمزية I LOVE JORDAN

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    Thumbs up رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mohbaboo مشاهدة المشاركة


    This one is dedicated to my best friend
    May Allah have mercy on his soul

    Firstly... the greeting of Islam ... peace be upon you
    and may Allah forgive your friend
    and all Muslims around the world...






    when I walk down the street
    I see lovely faces everywhere
    putting that smiley face
    not knowing what's in down here

    These are our words ... full of sensitivities ... when we feel them
    really beautiful words .... in spite of their great sadness ...


    lovely faces everywhere
    making jokes all the time
    sometimes they're stupid
    and sometimes senseless


    So hard situation ... it hurts much

    but maybe it is the only thing you have when he pass away

    the memories ...



    you IDIOTS!l

    tears
    and
    tears
    and
    tears

    (idiots, tears - together ? hmmm) I think that they have secret meaning ... maybe


    I don't understand them as it should be ... i guess you meant that your friend deserve more than these tears

    OK>>> this is make them A M A Z I N G




    I hate those superficial people
    me too

    as long as I have that one
    or had!
    l
    no no >>> say you always have , not you had >>> at least in yours


    the one who shared me his pain
    and to whom mine was shared to
    I'll never forget you
    I'll always remember you




    even when you're down there
    underneath the soil of the ground
    rest in peace my friend
    you'll always be there

    in
    my HEART

    i do not know what should i say ... after all these affective words


    it has been a long time since i have read such a powerful words

    but really you have a creative way of writing

    you described a great amount of sorrow in some briefed phrases


    i wish you success at another writings ... keep on writing

    I feel your words >>> that's why i tried to comment on every phrase ... but i failed


    and excuse me for my big mistakes ... i am not expert in English



    THANKS A LOT


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    الصورة الرمزية m.j.j

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    Thank u very much
    its amazing topic

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    الصورة الرمزية Anno.Sola

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    alslam 3licom wa rahmato allah wa brakatoh

    friendship is very nice ..

    sometimes its make you feel " soOo happy "

    but what i saw behind your words

    more than it

    that's the life ,

    but you should be strong like i saw now

    may Allah
    have mercy on his soul

    I welly happy of your patient : )

    May Allah be with you

    good luck







    .




    .









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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة I LOVE JORDAN مشاهدة المشاركة



    Firstly... the greeting of Islam ... peace be upon you
    and may Allah forgive your friend
    and all Muslims around the world...



    peace be upon you, too

    Amen
    thank you very much

    (idiots, tears - together ? hmmm) I think that they have secret meaning ... maybe

    I don't understand them as it should be ... i guess you meant that your friend deserve more than these tears

    OK>>> this is make them A M A Z I N G

    IDIOTS
    is when I cried at those people - the superficial with the smiley faces

    I called them idiots and I went crying
    they are the idiots and I am the one who is crying- I hope you get it now ^_^l


    no no >>> say you always have , not you had >>> at least in yours


    I had him physically and emotionally

    but now all what's left
    are the sweet memories


    i do not know what should i say ... after all these affective words


    it has been a long time since i have read such a powerful words

    but really you have a creative way of writing

    you described a great amount of sorrow in some briefed phrases


    i wish you success at another writings ... keep on writing

    I feel your words >>> that's why i tried to comment on every phrase ... but i failed


    and excuse me for my big mistakes ... i am not expert in English

    that's an honor dear sister

    I've been myself and I always be when it comes to writing
    what's in my heart comes out to my papers

    sure thing
    as long as we have those who we love, hate or whatever comes in between
    I'll keep writing

    you didn't fail at all
    my words reached you the way I wanted them to reach you

    ^_^ we all make mistakes
    and we try to learn from them

    I just had my long share of time with English

    and I would recommend you to read a lot and write at the same time to improve
    'cause good writers are good readers

    THANKS A LOT

    no all the thanks to you
    for you beautiful comment
    it meant a lot to me

    and excuse my very long comment
    but I like to write a lot

    all the best sister

    peace

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة m.j.j مشاهدة المشاركة
    Thank u very much
    its amazing topic
    you're welcome
    and appreciate your comment here

    peace

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anno.Sola مشاهدة المشاركة
    alslam 3licom wa rahmato allah wa brakatoh

    friendship is very nice ..

    sometimes its make you feel " soOo happy "

    but what i saw behind your words

    more than it

    that's the life ,

    but you should be strong like i saw now

    may Allah
    have mercy on his soul

    I welly happy of your patient : )

    May Allah be with you

    good luck

    peace be upon you, too Anno chan

    sure
    without the friends who we love and share our memories with
    life lacks it's flavor and the sweetness

    Amen
    thank you dear sister for your encouraging words
    they worked perfectly l

    and be with you as well

    thank you very much

    peace

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    الصورة الرمزية M!ss_KeKo

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    Difficult to judge you
    You will not liters intimate friend Again
    I had a friend Ahbbta a lot, but
    Dimension Kaci deprived me of Kieha
    Thank you to have prepared me memories
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة M!ss_KeKo ; 23-2-2010 الساعة 10:10 PM

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    الصورة الرمزية Schwert

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    Hello man, how r u, I'm feeling that I'm late to write this comment but some reasons was the cause of that; u know, you admire me by new wonderful topic again, that's poem is really well-arrange and nice job, may Allah have mercy on ur friend, I'll try to have the beneficial from these are poems may be I'll write something oneday who knows^ ^, I thank u my bro Mohbaboo for this effort and...go on^ ^, see you

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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة M!ss_KeKo مشاهدة المشاركة
    Difficult to judge you
    You will not liters intimate friend Again
    I had a friend Ahbbta a lot, but
    Dimension Kaci deprived me of Kieha
    Thank you to have prepared me memories
    thank you
    for your nice words and wisdom

    funny language you have loool

    peace

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Saber مشاهدة المشاركة
    Hello man, how r u, I'm feeling that I'm late to write this comment but some reasons was the cause of that; u know, you admire me by new wonderful topic again, that's poem is really well-arrange and nice job, may Allah have mercy on ur friend, I'll try to have the beneficial from these are poems may be I'll write something oneday who knows^ ^, I thank u my bro Mohbaboo for this effort and...go on^ ^, see you

    hey brother

    no you're not
    considering how the English forum is
    you know you write something and days pass without any comments

    Amen
    thank you for your honest feelings
    Allah bless you

    I'll be waiting for your writings soon hehehe

    I thank for supporting me

    seeya
    peace

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    الصورة الرمزية Hajime-san

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    hoooos
    *
    waaaaw it's soooo niiiiiiiice
    u're a good writer
    keep going bro
    u have a special touch in your poems
    ***
    gooooooooooooood luck

    Best regards

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    الصورة الرمزية pein-killer

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    mohahahahha xD

    i com from dreams mohahahhah <<< am i scary

    so

    It will read it later


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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hajime-san مشاهدة المشاركة
    hoooos
    *
    waaaaw it's soooo niiiiiiiice
    u're a good writer
    keep going bro
    u have a special touch in your poems
    ***
    gooooooooooooood luck

    Best regards
    hey
    welcome brother

    that an honor for me
    thank you
    I'm really flattered l

    good luck to you, too
    seeya around

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة pein-killer مشاهدة المشاركة
    mohahahahha xD

    i com from dreams mohahahhah <<< am i scary

    so

    It will read it later



    take your time but don't forget about me looool

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    الصورة الرمزية lolowenw

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    افتراضي رد: llllll In there you'll always be llllll

    Mashalla
    Its Really Great Words
    Specailly
    I hate those superficial people)
    or shall I say heartless
    but, I don't care
    as long as I have that one
    or had!)l


    to those people we should say to them GET LOST from mt life this is what i say to them

    I Hope to see more from your Topics

    Keep it always up
    see you

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