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Peace be upon you my dear Azuma
Glad to be the first to comment


First of all, “Lone Soul in Two Worlds”…such a nice title which grabbed my attention
The sun and its presence in winter and summer….as we complain of its intense heat in summer, we demand its bright beams in winter, two faces in one world =)


I like your way of describing how the daylight was and the thoughts of remembering the dead. You combined the sentences amazingly well. “All looked like small pieces of diamonds thrown in the green grass. I was in a deep contemplation, this is life!” wow, I can’t explain how wonderful this sentence is. And the coming part, you explained how it seemed as it would last forever, and then you asked a question allowing us to realize that which we thought eternal, “is it forever? Are we forever?” This question has stirred in me a mix feeling of sadness and happiness at the same time


The best part was when you said, “even if I die, the clock will keep tick ticking…” I recalled a poem, forgot its name ^^; , when the poet said nothing had changed since his friend’s death. Still the girl sings and people work. The sun will rise and the world will continue on leaving nothing behind which can show that someone is no more…


Such a wonder topic
Thanks for sharing this with us
Keep up walking forward >.<=b


I have to tell...I was distracted with you avy and sigy
Clair!!!!!! I really miss her and miss playing the game T^T