اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة black fox مشاهدة المشاركة
...Azuma

^ ^...All I can say is...Ma Sha'a Allah
...Really...Ma Sha'a Allah

....Your idea and how you described it
...Your detailed words...which let's the reader make a picture in his mind

^ ^...I liked all of it
^ ^...."Especially the second part....with the "green hill
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...Keep up...
^ ^"...Although is has some tiny grammar errors
^ ^"...Don't mind...it's ok
^ ^....But don't you ever stop writing


Really...Ma sha'a Allah

out of words
thanks for the too much ( masha'allah )^^ I hope I could take you all through my words to that place, to see what I saw
I was glad to have you among my readers
mistakes again?l
I think I do mind , so mark them please
thanks black fox
good luck
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the Assassin take your time brother
I'm eager to listen to your feedback ,good or bad , don't care just speak .
eeeeeerm if you don't mind you can evaluate my English level (Taking honesty into your consideration ^^)h