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[فاطمة الزهراء]

Ahmed has been fast asleep since last night

I hope it's right

Good

Just a little mistake

fast sleep

because asleep is adjective

Now Mine

ما سيحدث سوف يحدث و سنواجهه عندما يحدث

What will be hapened it is going to hapen and when does happen we will face it.

hhh it's obvious I made many mistakes hope to see the correction

by the way, for "does happen" I used it because sometimes I see such phrase like this, but I'm not sure if it is correct here.

welcome to u^^

me too^^
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^^

it‘s ok i am so happy keep talk as u wich

Thanks dear

yup it‘s correct

Really? Praise be to Alllah ^^

at last my translation is correct

ahmad slept off since yesterday

Hmm, doesn't sleep off mean get rid of sth by sleeping?

mine

لتحقق الشيء لابد من السعي لاجله

good luck

To carry out something you must try hard for it.

Is it correct?

Mine:

كان الهدوء يعم المكان، لكن فجأة سمعنا صوت تكسّر الزجاج.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[Harry Potter]

Just a little mistake

fast sleep

because asleep is adjective

Are you sure about that? , I mean always knew it as fast asleep as a whole,so I don't think that even if it's an adjective, it would matter in that context

What will be hapened it is going to hapen and when does happen we will face it.

yeah, it's okay , and also "does happen" is a smart choice here

but I think we can summarize it a little bit, so it would be like that

What will happen will happen, and we'll face when it happen

كان الهدوء يعم المكان، لكن فجأة سمعنا صوت تكسّر الزجاج.

It was all quiet , but suddenly we heard the glass crashing

?Is that right

Now Mine

فى العجله الندامه و فى التأنى السلامه

[Harry Potter]

غط أحمد في سبات عميق منذ ليلة أمس.

Ahmed has been fast asleep since last night

I hope it's right

Now Mine

ما سيحدث سوف يحدث و سنواجهه عندما يحدث

[لحن العذاب]

ammmm in same time we answer

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Good

Just a little mistake

fast sleep

because asleep is adjective

OH, I'm so sorry, I think I rushed in my answer

Yes yes Harry your translation is right

في أمان الله

[لحن العذاب]

Hmm, doesn't sleep off mean get rid of sth by sleeping?

sth

what U mean of it?

[فاطمة الزهراء]

what U mean of it?

It is an abbreviation of something

[Harry Potter]

Sorry, I didn't read your post about that fast asleep

ppl are posting really fast these days

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Sorry, I didn't read your post about that fast asleep

ppl are posting really fast these days

It's no problem at all

hhh yes

yeah, it's okay , and also "does happen" is a smart choice here

Aha, it's good that is correct.

but I think we can summarize it a little bit, so it would be like that

What will happen will happen, and we'll face when it happen

it happens

Yes this is short and better than mine

Thanks for your answer and correction

It was all quiet , but suddenly we heard the glass crashing

?Is that right

Yes, good

Now Mine

فى العجله الندامه و فى التأنى السلامه

هذه تنطبق علي ><

الترجمة:

Rashness leads to regret, so be careful to be in safety.

It is long again, but I feel it is not appropiate. Waiting for your correction.

Mine:

سيكون والدها على متن الطائرة المتوجهة إلى إيطاليا في الساعة التاسعة ليلًا.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله

[ابن الفاتح]

LOL, Sharloc Holmez Fan...Intersting

Okay, so you choosed a %#$#@#$ sentence..No Problem
at least I will try

يجدر بى ان احب كون العالم اصبح افضل قليلاً بوجودى (يا للتواضع !).
حتى فى هذه البقعه الضيقه لا نزال نملك جانبين فى شخصيتنا , و قد نفعل شيئاً ما بالاتكال على سعه افقنا ,التسامح ,الاحسان,السلام ,و العطف على الانسان و الوحوش
لا يمكننا كلنا ان نحقق الانجازات الكبيره , و حتى اقل الاشخاص لهم اهميه

CORRECTIONS ARE WELCOMED

...Now translate this


I know that I know nothing

ones here doesn't replace blows to avoid the repitition?

if that so I think we can translate it like this:

لا يمكننا جميعًا تحقيق الإنجازات الكبيرة، وحتى الصغيرة منها لها أهمية.

Hmm, I'm not sure

في أمان الله

harry : thanks for welcoming and why do i feel a little ...i don't know as if u don't like Sherlock Holmes
Fatima : for answering your q i must say this is old English talking the way and the style is different and if you read English literature you will know what I'm talking about
by the way i loved harry potter novels

if i may there's some thing : i know it was hard but why dont we try it one by one

الجملة الاولى : لكم أود لو أن العالم أصبح مكانا أفضل لوجودي فيه ، أو لكم أود أن يصبح العالم مكانا أفضل بسببي.
الجملة الثانية :حتى و على هذا المسرح الصغير فلدى كل شخص منا جانباه وبمكن إحداث فرق إذا ألقى الشخص بكل ثقله ( هنا يقصد جهده أو عمله أو فكره ) على ميزان (جانب ) قدرته أو تسامحه أو عطفه أو هدوئه أو مسالمته أو لطفه بالانسان و الحيوان
الجملة الأخيرة :ليس كلنا يستطيع إحداث فرق كبير (تغيير كبير ) في هذا العالم لكن حتى تلك الاختلافات البسيطة (التغييرات البسيطة ) تحتسب إحداثا للفرق

[ابن الفاتح]

سيكون والدها على متن الطائرة المتوجهة إلى إيطاليا في الساعة التاسعة ليلًا.

ii like the idea nice one
her father will be boarding the plane heading to Italy at 9:00 pm

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Fatima : for answering your q i must say this is old English talking

Aha that's why I didn't understand it



the way and the style is different and if you read English literature you will know what
I'm talking about




I see what you say cause I study English literature

But, we won't study old English until next year if it is Allah's will, especially in Shakespear's novels

if i may there's some thing : i know it was hard but why dont we try it one by one

الجملة الاولى : لكم أود لو أن العالم أصبح مكانا أفضل لوجودي فيه ، أو لكم أود أن يصبح العالم مكانا أفضل بسببي.
الجملة الثانية :حتى و على هذا المسرح الصغير فلدى كل شخص منا جانباه وبمكن إحداث فرق إذا ألقى الشخص بكل ثقله ( هنا يقصد جهده أو عمله أو فكره ) على ميزان (جانب ) قدرته أو تسامحه أو عطفه أو هدوئه أو مسالمته أو لطفه بالانسان و الحيوان
الجملة الأخيرة :ليس كلنا يستطيع إحداث فرق كبير (تغيير كبير ) في هذا العالم لكن حتى تلك الاختلافات البسيطة (التغييرات البسيطة ) تحتسب إحداثا للفرق

Aha, now I understand, thanks for correction and clarifying things.i

ii like the idea nice one
her father will be boarding the plane heading to Italy at 9:00 pm

Thanks for your opinion

OK, for the tanslation, as I know to board is used when we travel by ship

For the airplane we use the verb fly

We can simply say: Her father will be flying to Italy at 9:00 p.m.

Waiting for your sentence

في حفظ الله ورعايته

[ابن الفاتح]

على متن الطائرة

on the board

سيطير أو سيسافر

fly

I'm almost sure because i was traveling today by plane and i heard the same verb in another situation maybe it's wrong

by the way u study english nice very nice >>> for me I"am engineer so i have a little knowledge in English

جملتي :

ليس من رقع الثوب كمن ثوبه صحيح

[فاطمة الزهراء]

على متن الطائرة

on the board

سيطير أو سيسافر

fly

I'm almost sure because i was traveling today by plane and i heard the same verb in another situation maybe it's wrong

Hmm, actually when I studied English in the net, I found they use the verb fly when someone travels by plane

And also what I said before is what I learned from my teacher

Anyway, as you said, may be there is two possibilities

by the way u study english nice very nice >>> for me I"am engineer so i have a little knowledge in English

Thanks for encouraging me, I hope to strenghten my English as soon as possible by learning from you and from my studies

And by the way, as I see your English is good, no is better than mine

جملتي :

ليس من رقع الثوب كمن ثوبه صحيح

What a difference between a patched garment and a normal one!

I'm not sure of the adjective "normal"

Waiting for your correction

Mine:

حاول اللص الفرار بشتى الوسائل، ومع ذلك ألقت الشرطة القبض عليه في نهاية المطاف.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[ابن الفاتح]

oh very nice one fatima this is pro translation

thanks for your words I'm touched

i think right is better than normal here or if u wanted to be creative u can use new as i think

the thief has tried to escape by any possible means but at the end the police has arrested him

waiting for the right answer

thanks and be well

in god's guard

[Sos_chan]

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he thief has tried to escape by any possible means but at the end the police has arrested him

حاول اللص الهروب بأية وسيلة، ولكن الشرطة أمسكت به في النهاية

I'll be back with my sentence

back ~

A very small degree of hope is sufficient to cause the birth of succeeding

[ابن الفاتح]

حتى هنا أرى الابداع
oops i always foget that i suppost to speak in English any way

A very small degree of hope is sufficient to cause the birth of succeeding

إن بصيص الأمل كاف ليأذن بولادة النجاح

على فكرة تم قلب الآية الترجمة من العربية إلى الانجليزية : )

إن المستصعب قليل مستدرك ، فالامتحان لم يكن صعبا بل كان سهلا ممتنعا .

[Do Ri Me]

إن المستصعب قليل مستدرك ، فالامتحان لم يكن صعبا بل كان سهلا ممتنعا .

plz brother put signals at latters coz it made a confussion

الُمسَتصَّعب ُ ام المستصِِّعب ُُ so what ??? قليلٌ أم قليلاً


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the one who found it difficult has a little perception , the test wasn't difficult but inaccessible easy

I hope I got it correct


mine

في هذا الصباح الباكر انقلب الجو و استترت الشمس خلف الغيوم ...

( اوكي ؟ ...)

في امان الله ...

[أسمـــاء]

On this early morning ,the weather has changed and
the sun has hidden behind the clouds

??? is that ok

........................................

mine

احبب فيغدوا الكوخ كوناً نيراً , أبغض فيمسي الكون سجناً مظلما ...

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Peace be upon you

oh very nice one fatima this is pro translation

thanks for your words I'm touched

i think right is better than normal here or if u wanted to be creative u can use new as i think

You're welcome, and thank you as well for correction

I think new is very appropriate

the thief has tried to escape by any possible means but at the end the police has arrested him

Good

tحاول اللص الهروب بأية وسيلة، ولكن الشرطة أمسكت به في النهاية

Lol this is the sentence I put and sharloc translated it

mine

احبب فيغدوا الكوخ كوناً نيراً , أبغض فيمسي الكون سجناً مظلما ...

يغدو

OK, let's try:

By love the hut will be a shining universe, and by hate the universe becomes a dark prison.

or in different way:

If you love, the lightness of universe will hit the hut.
If you hate, the dakness of prison will spread over the universe.

Waiting for your correction

Mine:

عندما لا يكون أمامكَ أي عمل، انتهز الفرصة في القيام بأشياء مفيدة وإبداعية.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته