!something...I wrote 4 years ago

[Rainbow Star]

so Today I was bored so I started to look in my old things
hehe
bringing back memories
it's not like me

anyway...I found this file that I had when I whent to an institute for english
I was only thirteen I think at that time i had imagination cuz now i can never write something

the teacher told us to write a story called Adam's suitecase and it should start like this


Nobody knew what Adam had in his suitcase.... They all looked strangely at him. He was in a hurry. nobody knew how he just disappeared without leaving a trace. a woman said she heard him talking about stealing some diamonds on the plane. the police started looking for him. He is a theif and that's why he ran away.
Adam was in a taxi. he looked worried. he asked the driver to hurry, but the driver wasn't listening to him. he was listening to the radio. when he heard adam's descriptions, he stopped the car. adam was shouting 'hurry up!'. the taxi driver called the police, but at that time adam was running holding his suitcase he was looking at his watch and saying"OH NO the boss is going to kill me".

At last he reached the place he was going to, bu the police stopped him . suddenly a man came and shouted at adam "WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?The play is going to start!"

then the police found out that adam was an actor and he was practising the dialogue in the planeand his suitcase ...it was full of costumaes.
THE END

haah what do you think?i wasn't that bad thumbsup-

[Hajime-san]

haah what do you think?i wasn't that bad thumbsup-

huhuhu...yeahhh u wasn't
a niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice story huhuhuhuhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
stealing....police....taxi..boss...the end an actor
ohhhh God
looooooool i like it
.
thanks sis for this special story .. so if u have another st
don't be late
.
see u

[Blue $tar]

HI
Rainbow
,,
-yes0nice story
I was worried I wanted Adam to escape
heh
he's an actor
you have a great imagination,
you really have the elements to attract the reader
insha2Allah we'll see more stories from you
and you better say
''here's a story I wrote a week ago''
heh
wish the best for you
,,
C YA

[Rainbow Star]

oh my god
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you Hajime-san and blue star
you guys really encouraged me
I'll try..okay?

thanks again

[rikku]

so Today I was bored so I started to look in my old things
hehe
bringing back memories
it's not like me

i like doing that too
yeah good memories... u should open that file more if
it has stories like this one-yes0

loolz i felt like was inside of ur story, watching adam sweating in the taxi
looking around him to make sure that no one is suspecting him, x
i've even added some details the suitcase was leaking blood and
there was a head inside
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLZ0


i loved ur story... post some more
okay

[Rainbow Star]

haha

that's some imagination you've got
blood
creepy
thanx for reading