السلام عليكم ورحمة اللهـ وبركاتهـ

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته

pretty good
thnx a lot



I can't express how I felt reading this piece


U can rephrase this clause like this

I can't express how I felt when I'd read this piece
lol ... i bet you don't know the Adverbial Modifying Phrase technique
lol
in which you change the full clause into a phrase
so the 1st is true
and yours is true


for your knowledge , there's a lot of mistakes in this section
c'mon ... we all learners ... and all are human btw

thanx for ur nice critical comment
have a nice day