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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

i mean system in general and that's could be named machine

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Thanks for your answer

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Relying on Allah is a great worship

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I think it would be better if we say:

Seeking assistance from Allah is a great worship.i

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Harry Potter

Right, and by the way , that happened in 1975

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Aha, thanks for the information

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Harry Potter

Oh, I forgot to put my sentence

ما لا يدرك كله , لا يترك كله

Good Luck

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Hmm, let's try

When we don't learn a whole thing, it doesn't mean we completely leave it.

I'm not sure if this is the exact meaning

So I am waiting for the correction

Next sentence:

الوقت كالسيف إذا لم تقطعه قطعك.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Peace upon you

Time is sword that will cut you if you don't

I^^"
I hope it's right

try this
أجمعت أمري، وقررت أن أسلك ذاك الطريق
easy right

^^

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Sos_chan

Peace upon you

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peace be upon you

And peace to you

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Time is sword that will cut you if you don't

I^^"
I hope it's right

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There is a nice proverb, and I think it can be a translation of this one:

Time and tide wait for no man.

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try this
أجمعت أمري، وقررت أن أسلك ذاك الطريق
easy right

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I decided to follow that way.

Is it right?

Mine:

ما أقل ما سيكون تواجدي هذه الأيام (على ما يبدو).

Good luck

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

I gathered my self, and decided to follow that way ^^

ok (yoshaaa) xD:
It seems that I will rarely coexist here these days

ok now try this tiny sentence ^^

سأحقق أهدافي وأحلامي بالرغم من كل المصاعب

despite all hardships ,I will achieve my dreams and goals

يا صديقي ، لا تغتر بنفسك !

Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

يا صديقي ، لا تغتر بنفسك !

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O my friend, don't be boastful!

Is it right?

Mine:

عند قراءتنا للروايات يمكننا توقع ما سيحدث في النهاية، أما نهاية القصص القصيرة تكون خارج التوقعات.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

when we read a novel , we can expect the end . but manga ( or comics )'s end usually out of expectations


لم أشأ مناداته بالديكتاتور لكن أفعاله بعدت تماما عن أقواله . تبا لمن جوراحه تعمل بخلاف لسانه !!!


okay ... happy weekend
not 4 me but 4 u
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في آمان الله و رعايته

تحية طيبة لكم جميعا ... و أشكرك فاطمة على التصحيح ، فعلا كما قلتِ فإن الجملة أجمل هكذا .

لم أشأ مناداته بالديكتاتور لكن أفعاله بعدت تماما عن أقواله . تبا لمن جوراحه تعمل بخلاف لسانه !!!

I didn't want to call him a dictator,but his actions were different than his words , damn who do this

or damn those who act like this

لم أترجم الجملة حرفيا ... معذرة

أحب أن أكون كما أنا ، لا أن أكون كما يحب الناس .

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السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته

when we read a novel , we can expect the end . but manga ( or comics )'s end usually out of expectations

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وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

Sorry I made a big mistake

Instead to say

قصص قصيرة

I said

قصص مصورة

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I'm really sorry, I was in hurry like at this moment

so I can't translate the sentence now because of my studies

And by the way weekend hasn't come yet LOL

وفق الله الجميع

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

I like to be as who I am , not as others like me to be

correct me if thers'er errors

هل علىّ أن أحمل السلاح و الموت في عالم الحروب و الدمار كي أثبت للعالم أنني إنسان ؟

hi sis Fatima
huhuhu
u made me laught at time i am so angry

don't mention that
Never mind

oh weekend ... it's already weekend u don't know
huhuhuhuh
coz of univresity ... it's our weekend in anyway

study well ... don't be like me

and peace be upon u

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

هل علىّ أن أحمل السلاح و الموت في عالم الحروب و الدمار كي أثبت للعالم أنني إنسان ؟

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Should I hold the weapon and death in a world where there are wars and destruction, so as to prove my humanity to the world?

Waiting for correction

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

hi sis Fatima
huhuhu
u made me laught at time i am so angry

don't mention that
Never mind

oh weekend ... it's already weekend u don't know
huhuhuhuh
coz of univresity ... it's our weekend in anyway

study well ... don't be like me

and peace be upon u

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Hi dear sis

lool I'm glad to make you laugh

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So my mistake was useful this time :P

For weekends, we are different from you

They are Saturdays and Sundays

I have no sentence now

Anyone can put a new one

في أمان الله

somehow a right

don't have any objects at this time

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They are Saturdays and Sundays

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got it ^^"

so now I'll put a sentence

و بعد فراق دام أكثر من سنة سيلتقي الصديقان ... بإذن الله

see ya'
it's weekend mina
have fun
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After being apart for over a year, the friends will meet again - if Allah wants

أتمنى ان تكون صحيحة ...

I have a comment on the sentence that Fatoom translated before
Ill put It later coz I have no time
and can any 1 put a senr. instead of me

Ja ne ~

After being apart for over a year, the friends will meet again - if Allah wants

أتمنى ان تكون صحيحة ...

I have a comment on the sentence that Fatoom translated before
Ill put It later coz I have no time
and can any 1 put a senr. instead of me

Ja ne ~

سلام الله عليكم ورحمته وبركاته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Sos_chan

I have a comment on the sentence that Fatoom translated before
Ill put It later coz I have no time
and can any 1 put a senr. instead of me

Ja ne ~

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Nice, I am waiting for you

I was sure I made some mistakes especially when I used the verb hold with death LOL

OK, here the sentence:

الأفعال أبلغ من الأقوال.

في أمان الله

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته

كيف الحال ؟

hi sis fatima and soso

o my bad .. I had put words with out parallelism

it's my fault
but if you don't know this sentence from a Britin song about War
I memorize its words ( lyrics ) so ... what I wanna say is ur translating is differnt somehow from the orginal lyrics
but they are good

about death ... it's my fault ...I had to say
" و أن أموت "
to make parallelism at it


My bad ( slang means I am sorry ) plz pardon me

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الأفعال أبلغ من الأقوال

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this confused me so much
the word " أبلغ "
I couldn't define its meaning in Arabic , so then how about translating it to English
huhuh

but
it can be more effiction
so

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Actions Speak Louder than sayings

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ha ???

if yes try this

كن في الدنيا كأنك غريب ... فطوبى للغرباء

^^+
في امان الله

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته

كيف الحال ؟

hi sis fatima and soso

o my bad .. I had put words with out parallelism

it's my fault
but if you don't know this sentence from a Britin song about War
I memorize its words ( lyrics ) so ... what I wanna say is ur translating is differnt somehow from the orginal lyrics
but they are good

about death ... it's my fault ...I had to say
" و أن أموت "
to make parallelism at it



My bad ( slang means I am sorry ) plz pardon me

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Hi dear ^^

I'm fine thanks, and you?

Aha, you don't have to appology, it's OK

And thanks for the explanation

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Actions Speak Louder than sayings

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Good, but not "sayings" the correct word is "words" as said
in the proverb

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My bad ( slang means I am sorry )

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Aha thanks for the info

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كن في الدنيا كأنك غريب ... فطوبى للغرباء

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Consider yourself as an alien in this world... Those aliens have the honour to be happy (blessed).

hmm... waiting for correction

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University is troublesome

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Yes yes too much :d

Now, try this:

الضحك ممتع ومفيد، لكن علينا ألا نجعله رفيقنا في كل الأمور. << أيام سبيس تون :P

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله

The laughing is funny and useful .. but we shouldn't make it a friend in all life's matters

is it true ? ~





يوم ما .. ليس من أيام الأسبوع














Mudia

hi every One

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يوم ما .. ليس من أيام الأسبوع

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One day .. Not days of the week^^''



الحب هو قصور المحب عن النظر لشخص اخر

good luck

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Consider yourself as an alien in this world... Those aliens have the honour to be happy (blessed).

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hi sis fatima
it will be better not to put consider
I prefer to put :" be in this life as ..." got it
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thanx in anyway


hi sis melody of pain
لحن العذاب هههه ترجمة فاشلة ^___^

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love is the lover's failure to see another

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إن تضحك تضحك لك الدنيا ...

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة موديا1992

The laughing is funny and useful ..

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OK, the noun of the verb "to laugh" is laughter

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but we shouldn't make it a friend in all life's matters

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I think it'd better to add as after make it

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

hi sis fatima
it will be better not to put consider
I prefer to put :" be in this life as ..." got it
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thanx in anyway

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Hello sis Do Ri Me! How are you?

Yes of course I got it

It's just a matter of changing the verb LOL

I thought it could have the same meaning if we say consider

Thanks for the correction

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إن تضحك تضحك لك الدنيا ...

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I remember a nice proverb, so I want to use a part of it as a translation to your sentence

Laugh and the world laughs with you.

Is it OK?

My sentence:

الحمد لله، أخيرًا جاءت الإجازة الأسبوعية بعد أسبوع مضنٍ.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Thanks Allah ... the weekend has finally come after a hard week


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لايوجد شخص ضعيف بل يوجد شخص يجهل مناطق قوته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة موديا1992

لايوجد شخص ضعيف بل يوجد شخص يجهل مناطق قوته

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Nobody is weak, it is just a matter of ignoring the strong points of oneself.

Waiting for the correction

Now, try this:

الضحك بلا سبب من قلة الأدب.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Laughter without reason is lack of manners

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أحبك يا أميرة هذا الزمان ... !





















Mudia

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أحبك يا أميرة هذا الزمان ... !

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I love you, princess this time


فؤادك حيث شئت من الهـوى مالحـب إلا للحبيـب الآخرicon001



good luck

hi every one

yaa talking about love
:)

this is my translating but not sure about it


your heart is in any way in love ... but the only love is for the last lover

:)


أوراق مبعثرة ، أقلام مترامية ( اعتبروا القلم حبر ) هنا و هناك ، و لا معالم للمكتب ! ببساطة هذا حال جامعية مشغولة !


good luck
^^"

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

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hi every one


:)


أوراق مبعثرة ، أقلام مترامية ( اعتبروا القلم حبر ) هنا و هناك ، و لا معالم للمكتب ! ببساطة هذا حال جامعية مشغولة !


good luck
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Hi sis Do Re Mi << it is easy to write it like this :d

how are you?

Hmm, OK here my attempt:

Here papers are messed up, there pens are thrown down, and even the margins of the desk are disappeared!
In other word, this is a situation of a busy collegiate student!

Waiting for the correction :)

Now, try this:

الناجح يفكر في الحل.. والفاشل يفكر في المشكلة.
الأول لا تنضب أفكاره.. والثاني لا تنضب أعذاره.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

hi sis fatima
THanks my Allah in anyway ... I am fine today And Hope to be like this all the day
And you sis
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about ur translatin ... I catch the word " margins " ... this word me sick huhuh
in Writing course we have to use it at the paper ... I prefer to use " shape " and ... that's what I just think
^___^"""


My translating

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successful thinks of solution and failure thinks of the problem ...

the first , his ideas don't run out. the second , his excuses don't run out .

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^^ ?????

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تأخر المدرس عن موعد درسه ، فغادر الطلاب قبل أن يصل .

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Good luck

Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

hi sis fatima
THanks my Allah in anyway ... I am fine today And Hope to be like this all the day
And you sis
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Hi ^^

Hmm.. not bad, but anyway praise be to Allah :)

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about ur translatin ... I catch the word " margins " ... this word me sick huhuh
in Writing course we have to use it at the paper ... I prefer to use " shape " and ... that's what I just think
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lol yes yes you're right

I forgot about the word shape ^^"

Thanks for the correction

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successful thinks of solution and failure thinks of the problem ...

the first , his ideas don't run out. the second , his excuses don't run out .

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We usually put the noun after the adjectif right?

So, I think we can say:

Who thinks of a solution is a succesful person. But the one who thinks of the problem is unsuccesful.
The former, his ideas don't run out. The latter, his excuses don't run out.i

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تأخر المدرس عن موعد درسه ، فغادر الطلاب قبل أن يصل .

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Because the teacher/ the professor came late, students had already left.

Is it right?

Mine:

يا له من يوم..! بل يا له من عام..! أهذه دراسة أم عذاب؟!

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

hi sis fatma how UIcon-flowers0

i think this year make U very made do‘t why i feel that lolicon114

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يا له من يوم..! بل يا له من عام..! أهذه دراسة أم عذاب؟!

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What a day ..! But what a year ..! Is this study or torment?!

mine

لو لم اكن انا لوددت ان اكون انا

good luck

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

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hi sis fatma how UIcon-flowers0

i think this year make U very made do‘t why i feel that lolicon114

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Hello dear La7n ^^

Hmm, it's OK, Praise be to Allah. What about you?

Yes, I am fed up with our academic regime _", if you were in my position you would see why I am VERY ANGRY icon147i

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لو لم اكن انا لوددت ان اكون انا

good luck

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That reminds me of philosophy :P

Seems little hard icon114

Hmm...

If I were not "me", I would myself to be me.

LOL, waiting for the correction

Now, try this

سأل الـ"ممكن" الـ"مستحيــل" : أين تقيم؟
فأجابه: في أحلام العاجز.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

?the possible asked the impossible where u live
the impossible said in the incapable dream's
i hope its right

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kakashe

?the possible asked the impossible where u live
the impossible said in the incapable dream's
i hope its right

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Where do you live?

You can replace the second "the impossible" by he or other word to avoid the repitition, like that:

The latter/ He answered: "In the incapable's dreams."

OK, it is your turn to put a sentence

في أمان الله

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فاطمة الزهراء

Where do you live?

You can replace the second "the impossible" by he or other word to avoid the repitition, like that:

The latter/ He answered: "In the incapable's dreams."

OK, it is your turn to put a sentence

في أمان الله

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السلام عليكم
TY FOR THE NOTES
i wont put any sentences its not funny or iam not in mode so any1 can put instead of me
sry 4 that
jana

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة kakashe

السلام عليكم
TY FOR THE NOTES
i wont put any sentences its not funny or iam not in mode so any1 can put instead of me
sry 4 that
jana

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وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

You're welcome

Ah, OK, I put another one:

لا تقل يا رب عندي هم كبير، بل قل يا هم عندي رب كبير.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

dont say "god i have a big burde" but say " burde i have a great god" , i hope its right

mmmmmmmm, and again i wont put a sentence coz its boring

sup guys? is my sentence is wrong or right?

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

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dont say "god i have a big burde" but say "

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burden

God

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burde i have a great god" , i hope its right

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It would be better if you used O before burden and God

Besides, I think the sentence won't be wrong if you repeat great in both of them.i

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mmmmmmmm, and again i wont put a sentence coz its boring

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Just put any sentence, it is OK

I hope you do it or anyone because I already put other one

في حفظ الله ورعايته

لا تقل يا رب عندي هم كبير، بل قل يا هم عندي رب كبير

No tell how big my burde is, but how great is my God

جرب التالي:

تروح وتمضي بنات الثرى .. فتمحو محاسن تلك الصور

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لا تقل يا رب عندي هم كبير، بل قل يا هم عندي رب كبير

No tell how big my burde is, but how great is my God

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Good

but as I said before burden

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جرب التالي:

تروح وتمضي بنات الثرى .. فتمحو محاسن تلك الصور

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I think it is a verse of poetry

Unfortunately I cannot translate poetries

I hope someone else transltes it

في حفظ الله ورعايته

hey there how r u all

iam sorry for not visiting alot these days

University is holding us up what can we do

any way let's see what happened

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تروح وتمضي بنات الثرى .. فتمحو محاسن تلك الصور

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that's not fair because poetry cannot be translated from language to language but it can be explained

and u have chosen a very sad verse , it talks about death

we will end up in our graves which will take away every thing beautiful we had

or

when a beautiful woman dies her beauty will be gone


and he means here that the grave will eat every thing that u were proud of in ur life

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

Welcome sharloc

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

University is holding us up what can we do

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Yes you are right

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that's not fair because poetry cannot be translated from language to language but it can be explained

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That is my problem -no matter how language is- how to understand it

It is not the matter of despair because it is a poetry, absolutely not!

I hope you got my idea now

By the way, although I do my best to understand it, at last I don't get it, especially if there is an implicitness in verses.

However, poetries are still nice

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and u have chosen a very sad verse , it talks about death

we will end up in our graves which will take away every thing beautiful we had

or

when a beautiful woman dies her beauty will be gone


and he means here that the grave will eat every thing that u were proud of in ur life

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Aha, so it is about Grave

Thanks for the explanation, now I get it

It is your turn to put a new sentence

في أمان الله

ليس من العدل ان تأخذ ما ليس ملكك و لكن من العدل ان تعطى ما هو ملكك
translate this

ليس من العدل ان تأخذ ما ليس ملكك و لكن من العدل ان تعطى ما هو ملكك

It's unfair to take something is not yours but the fair is when u give the others what do u have

I hope it's right
^_^
ok now mine

احيانا قد تصنع اشياء لاتستحق الذكر ولكنها عند الاخرين لاتقدر بثمن

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته

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احيانا قد تصنع اشياء لاتستحق الذكر ولكنها عند الاخرين لاتقدر بثمن

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some times we do things that even cant be mentioned but others think it is priceless

hope correct


now mine

تعودت أن لا أنحني لألتقط ماقد سقط من عيني

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة لحن العذاب

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته



now mine

تعودت أن لا أنحني لألتقط ماقد سقط من عيني

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وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

I was used not to be bent down in order to pick up what dropped from my eyes.

Is it correct?

Now, try this:

أروع القلوب قلب يخشى الله.. أجمل الكلام ذكر الله.. وأنقى الحب الحب في الله.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله

Peace be upon u all
Long time no see ^^"
Fatoom your sentence is amazing even though it's hard to translate ^^"
this is my try:

The most marvelous hearts are those which dread Allah, the most beautiful words are mentioning Allah, and the purest love is to love in Allah.

I hope it's correct, even thought I think there is something wrong =\

إن شئت العلا، فتحمل لدغات النحل، وتحمل تسلق الجبال

stupid sentence by the way, but this is what I came up with ^^

take care ALL

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Sos_chan

Peace be upon u all
Long time no see ^^"
Fatoom your sentence is amazing even though it's hard to translate ^^"

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Welcome Sosah

And peace to you

Really it is long time no see

Thank you but it isn't my sentence. In fact it is one of the beautiful sentences I heard before ^^

اقتباس:

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this is my try:

The most marvelous hearts are those which dread Allah, the most beautiful words are mentioning Allah, and the purest love is to love in Allah.

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The most beautiful words are praising Allah>> It is better

and the purest love is to love for the sake of Allah.

Good attempt :)i

اقتباس:

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إن شئت العلا، فتحمل لدغات النحل، وتحمل تسلق الجبال

stupid sentence by the way, but this is what I came up with ^^

take care ALL

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Not at all, it is nice ^^

OK, let's try:

If you want to be on the top, you should tolerate bites of bees and endure mountaineering.

Is it right?

Now, try this:

الحياة ألم يخفيه أمل.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

wow! i tried everything and cant write a correct form for the sentence

life is pain hide by hope

i hope it's correct i have done my best in it