السلام عليكم ورحمة اللهـ وبركاتهـ

pretty good

even thought I did not read it completely

but I notice a little mistake at comments

I can't express how I felt reading this piece


U can rephrase this clause like this

I can't express how I felt when I'd read this piece

^_^

sorry about that

but I can't pass a mistake without correct it << big liar

for your knowledge , there's a lot of mistakes in this section