Peace be upon you my dear Naro-chan
What a fabulous lines you've wrote
The "tick, tack, tock" really grabbed my attention
I was wondering where does this sound come from and
at the end it was only..... ^^ kinda relieved
Such wonderful words from an amazing poetess =)

Only one line which confused me
Caught uts head but I
I wonder, what does "uts" mean? or is it a typo? ^__^

Hoping to see more from you
Keep up going forward
Good luck >.<=b