المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Azuma
Hello again , congratulations for having the end displayed over here
The end?
My story didn't end. There are 2 chapters left
I'm at dead end in chapter 7 -____-
The story seems to be written by Good English writer who were highly inspired by stories she read before , things she has watched as well as great deal of experiences in life which is the greatest element behind showing this story .
And you are an amazing reader and also a writer
Thanks for the nice words. I really appreciate it so much
To be honest , from the first glance I took at your story , it feels like it would be kinda of fantasy and myth , but I believed you wanted to drew our attention to sth symbolic hidden among your lines.
While I was shocked to read (purifying from sins , fly to lord and such, these christen aspects has nothing to do with the real meanings of your story ...it's just like the story is wearing a western appearance but the core is yours
BINGO!!!
I never meant it to have any Christian aspects. It was directed for something else
which I wish
you as my readers to figure out
Let's come to the end which I was waiting for , It's also sad but yet happy .
I mean ..isn't the moment when some body realized that all what he dedicated his life for was just a lie is considered as something pleasing and happy moment
what I mean is awakening from the darkness of lies to the light of truth is quite painful but worthy even compared to that pain or more!
for that reason I'm saying it's happy
First of all, its not the ending. I'm sorry to disappoint you ^^;
You'll be reading 2 more chapters
I don't like ending my stories just by realizing
And I agree with you on the happy ending, that is if it really ended here with chapter 5 ^^;
The language is of someone professional masha'alla (I honestly like it )
the description , the wonderings of her at last is all admirable
Thanks, merci, arigatou and Shukria for the nice words ^
///^
I feel flattered
and there is some misspelled words
Is it the word "week". If so then yeah I did a mistake
It was supposed to be "weak". Sorry for that. I'll correct it
If there are others, please tell me
do not forget that I'm waiting a full criticism about mine
I will after I finish it and re-read it again
Thanks for commenting and spending your time to read my story
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Naro-chan
lol ... last thing ... you are a teacher after all ^^""" how ++++ no comment lol
who knows ... may be i am gonna end with teaching after all -___-"""
Huh? so does that mean you didn't believe I was a teacher up until now?
And no comment, huh?
Stand up!
lol teacher student relationship ^__~
Some students hate to be told to stand up in the middle of the lesson even if they were the ones at wrong
I know of another way to make them behave well instead of standing up
Anyway, Insha'Allah you'll become a teacher soon and together, you and I, can share our
sad and happy moments =)
it's my honor to read and analysis with you
The honor is all mine, my lady~
that's reminds me of " the theory of the cave " by Plato c'mon you are very smart to include such a thing like this
Hmm never read this theory. I'll check on it
we have to write a daily report about every class
so today i read mine and it was ... hhhhhh the truth
i said to him i didn't understand a word from you
he was happy for being so honest ... ^^""
Not even a word?
I understand his feelings. He must be in agony right now
Its true that honestly is a nice thing, but it hurts
Our students are our responsibilities....wait this seems a cool sentence
I might begin writing a story about students and teachers
Yeah a wonderful idea. Thanks Naro-chan =)
You gave me a magnificent plot for my next next story
even i will repeat my first thank in my first post here .... to that thing lol
I wonder what that thing is....so suspicious <__< >__>
I wonder more on why do you refuse telling me
btw i am around 20 ... not young not old
Ara? kawaii...such a young girl
i will wait for another work from you ... don't forget i am waiting
Allah with you
I'll try my best to complete my new story. Now I'm at chapter 3
and I have a hunch that I'll give up middle way
Thanks to all who commented and read my story even without posting a comment
and thanks for sending me msgs. I'm sorry I can't reply to them
I'm trying my best to stick here and post till I reach the specific amount of posts
so I can reply to you all
Please bear with me and my sad, gloomy stories ^^;
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