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[P E I N]

السلام عليكم ورحمة اللهـ وبركاتهـ

pretty good

even thought I did not read it completely

but I notice a little mistake at comments

I can't express how I felt reading this piece

U can rephrase this clause like this

I can't express how I felt when I'd read this piece

^_^

sorry about that

but I can't pass a mistake without correct it << big liar

for your knowledge , there's a lot of mistakes in this section

[Naro-chan]

السلام عليكم ورحمة اللهـ وبركاتهـ

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته

pretty good

thnx a lot

I can't express how I felt reading this piece


U can rephrase this clause like this

I can't express how I felt when I'd read this piece

lol ... i bet you don't know the Adverbial Modifying Phrase technique
lol
in which you change the full clause into a phrase
so the 1st is true
and yours is true

for your knowledge , there's a lot of mistakes in this section

c'mon ... we all learners ... and all are human btw

thanx for ur nice critical comment
have a nice day