وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

Thank you shoog for this great topic
The way you presented the two poems attracted my atention alot

As for me. I prefered the first poem
I felt that the comparrision between human and the daffofils
was appropriate.
The poet shows that the the flower won't die alone
Even man dies.
The difference is between the period of each one's life
In fact, I enjoyed reading it alot

The second poem was great too
The poet has a challenging character
Even that the he might die any moment
because Death can take his life, he wasn't afraid from it
And he was misunderstimating the power of death
by comparing it with charms and poppy

Thank you for these great poems shoog
And I'm looking forward to seeing your next topics