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[فاطمة الزهراء]

Peace be upon you

oh very nice one fatima this is pro translation

thanks for your words I'm touched

i think right is better than normal here or if u wanted to be creative u can use new as i think

You're welcome, and thank you as well for correction

I think new is very appropriate

the thief has tried to escape by any possible means but at the end the police has arrested him

Good

tحاول اللص الهروب بأية وسيلة، ولكن الشرطة أمسكت به في النهاية

Lol this is the sentence I put and sharloc translated it

mine

احبب فيغدوا الكوخ كوناً نيراً , أبغض فيمسي الكون سجناً مظلما ...

يغدو

OK, let's try:

By love the hut will be a shining universe, and by hate the universe becomes a dark prison.

or in different way:

If you love, the lightness of universe will hit the hut.
If you hate, the dakness of prison will spread over the universe.

Waiting for your correction

Mine:

عندما لا يكون أمامكَ أي عمل، انتهز الفرصة في القيام بأشياء مفيدة وإبداعية.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[Do Ri Me]

When you don't have any work to do . just take the opportunity by doing creative useful things …

Mine

ابحث في ذاك العقل الخَرِب عن معنى وجودك في هذه الحياة . لن تجد إلا إجابة واحدة أكيدة : نحن عباد الله ...

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Peace be upon you

When you don't have any work to do . just take the opportunity by doing creative useful things …

It's good

Just instead of using full stop you should put a comma as you see in the quote

Mine

ابحث في ذاك العقل الخَرِب عن معنى وجودك في هذه الحياة . لن تجد إلا إجابة واحدة أكيدة : نحن عباد الله ...

If you want to know the essence of your existence, then you have just to look for it in that mind of yours, and you'll find there is only certain answer that is we are worshippers of Allah.

Hmm, by the way, I don't know a nice word as an equivalent of
خرب

^^" So I didn't translate it

Waiting for your correction

My sentence:

ومرة أخرى تخونه الذاكرة فينسى لقاءً مهمًا.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[Do Ri Me]

hi sis ... how are you
???
peace be upon u

about mine ... ya " comma" is very very important
i really forgot it

about the word
" خرب " huhuh
there are many words with the same meaning
sorry to make u confuse
if i were u i'd put " ruined " it will be okay

[i love ur way in translating

^^"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""


okay
about urs

and again ,he didn't remember and forgot an important meeting

hope to correct me directly***


mine

المصيبة أن سرعة اتصال الانترنت ستقودني لمشفى المجانين قريبا ...

okay ... good luck

[فاطمة الزهراء]

hi sis ... how are you
???
peace be upon u

Hello dear sis Do Ri Me, I'm fine thanks, what about you? ^^

And peace to you

about mine ... ya " comma" is very very important
i really forgot it

No problem

about the word
" خرب " huhuh
there are many words with the same meaning
sorry to make u confuse
if i were u i'd put " ruined " it will be okay

Yes I know some of them especially ruined, but I was afraid they may not be nice or appropriate so, I thought of another verb and nothing came of it lol

Thanks for your answer

[i love ur way in translating

^^"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""

Thanks dear

okay
about urs

and again ,he didn't remember and forgot an important meeting

hope to correct me directly***

Yes, it is correct

By the way, there is two nice expressions as a translation of

خانتني الذاكرة

We can say: My memory lets me down or My memory fails me

mine

المصيبة أن سرعة اتصال الانترنت ستقودني لمشفى المجانين قريبا ...

okay ... good luck

My Internet's speed is really a catastrophe, and may leads me to the madmen's hospital.

Is it correct?

Mine:

بينما الناس يطلبون المساعدة، ظل فلان واقفًا وقفة المتفرج دون أن يُحرك ساكنًا لمد يد العون لهم.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي أمان الله ورعايته

[موديا1992]

While people wanted the help , he kept standing with no move to help them


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هل ما زلت تظن أنك أقوى البشر ؟

[فاطمة الزهراء]

While people wanted the help , he kept standing with no move to help them

Good

هل ما زلت تظن أنك أقوى البشر ؟

Do you still believe that you are the strongest man?

Is it correct?

Mine:

ليتَني الآن بمزاج جيد، فما حدث اليوم لا يمكنني نسيانه بسهولة.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[موديا1992]

I hope that I'm in good mood now .. but what happened today , I could never forget it

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لو كنت مكاني لانتقمت !

[فاطمة الزهراء]

I hope that I'm in good mood now .. but what happened today , I could never forget it

Good

But in this sentence there is a wish not hope

Because, I said

ليتَني

So, we will say:

I wish (that) I'm in a good mood now

لو كنت مكاني لانتقمت !

If you were in my place, you would revenge!

Mine:

أقدم المجرم على الانتحار بعدما ارتكب جريمته النكراء.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[Do Ri Me]

the criminal committed suicide after he had done his atrocious crime

mine

إنه يوم الجمعة ، لا تنسَ تلاوة سورة الكهف .

okay I hope u didn't forget that
with my love everyone

في آمان الله و رعايته

[loly222]

mine

إنه يوم الجمعة ، لا تنسَ تلاوة سورة الكهف .

okay I hope u didn't forget that
with my love everyone

في آمان الله و رعايته

well come back

دوري

It's Friday, do not forget to read Surat Al-Kahf.

my turn

رضا الوالدين اولا واخيرا فلاتعصيهما


your brother loly222

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Peace be upon you

إنه يوم الجمعة ، لا تنسَ تلاوة سورة الكهف .

okay I hope u didn't forget that
with my love everyone

في آمان الله و رعايته

May Allah give you the best reward for reminding us

OK, here the translation:

It's Friday, so don't forget to recite Surat Al-Kahf.i

رضا الوالدين اولا واخيرا فلاتعصيهما

Above all you must obey your parents to make them satisfied.

I hope it's correct

Mine:

كلما مرت علي ذكريات حزينة، أحاول قدر استطاعتي محوها من ذاكرتي.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[Do Ri Me]

hi brother loly ...
u know it's the 1st time I realized that u r a boy not a girl
anyhow ...
ur answer is okay
but
the better is to say ... recite instead of read
as my dear sis Fatima said
that's coz it's the holly Qura'an

and thanx my sis

every time that sorrowful memorycame at mind , I tried my best to get rid of it from my memory

hope it's correct this time ^^"

mine

الشك المفرط كان سبب مقتل هاملت ، بينما الغيرة المفرطة أودت بحياة عطيل و زوجه .

مانها صعبة ؟؟^^"

okay dears good luck

[فاطمة الزهراء]

and thanx my sis

You are welcome

every time that sorrowful memorycame at mind , I tried my best to get rid of it from my memory

I think there is no need to add that after every time

We can add it if we identify the memory we mean by

But here memories is in general.

And also, you don't have to repeat memory and you already said mind.

So we can say:

Every time my sorrowful memories came to mind, I did my best to get rid of them.

mine

الشك المفرط كان سبب مقتل هاملت ، بينما الغيرة المفرطة أودت بحياة عطيل و زوجه .

The death of Hamlet is caused by his excessive doubt.
But Atel and his wife were killed because of their superfluous jealousy.

I hope it is correct ^^"

Mine:

كل امرئ يجزى بما فعل.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[zimaxo]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

Good evening english fourm's Folks

I see that you have got avery nice and educative game running over here

ok about the sentance

كل امرئ يجزى بما فعل.

every body is rewared for what he or she have done

hope it's perfect

and my sentance is

لا يغلِبُ ذا اللّبِ في المقالِ إلا الجاهلُ .

see you soon
إن شاء الله .

[فاطمة الزهراء]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

Good evening english fourm's Folks

I see that you have got avery nice and educative game running over here

ok about the sentance

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

Welcome zimaxo

every body is rewared for what he or she have done

has done

Yes good you can translate it like this, or we can say:

Every body will either be rewarded or punished depending on what he/ she has done.i

and my sentance is

لا يغلِبُ ذا اللّبِ في المقالِ إلا الجاهلُ .

The ignorant is the only one who defeats the intelligent in his/ her essay.

I somehow feel that is my translation is not good and really wrong, but I translated it like this as I see from your sentence. Waiting for your correction

Mine:

خير الكلام ما قل ودل.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[ابن الفاتح]

Iam returning sorry for being late

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Iam returning sorry for being late

Welcome back Sharloc

No problem

Waiting for your translation and sentence

في حفظ الله ورعايته

[ابن الفاتح]

oh ...thanks fatima

mm

Best words are few with full indication

الصديق عند الضيق

[ابن الفاتح]

لا يغلِبُ ذا اللّبِ في المقالِ إلا الجاهلُ .
The ignorant is the only one who defeats the intelligent in his/ her essay

if i may say i would say : no one can win in argument with an ignorant

what do you think fatima

المشكلة بالأمثال العربية بأن ترجمتها ليست حرفية إنما يؤخذ معنى الجملة و يصاغ بطريقة انجليزية وهذا صعب ليس بسهل



Any way zimaxo welcome and be well