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Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

oh very nice one fatima this is pro translation

thanks for your words I'm touched

i think right is better than normal here or if u wanted to be creative u can use new as i think

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You're welcome, and thank you as well for correction

I think new is very appropriate

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the thief has tried to escape by any possible means but at the end the police has arrested him

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Good

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Sos_chan

tحاول اللص الهروب بأية وسيلة، ولكن الشرطة أمسكت به في النهاية

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Lol this is the sentence I put and sharloc translated it

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Azuma

mine

احبب فيغدوا الكوخ كوناً نيراً , أبغض فيمسي الكون سجناً مظلما ...

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يغدو

OK, let's try:

By love the hut will be a shining universe, and by hate the universe becomes a dark prison.

or in different way:

If you love, the lightness of universe will hit the hut.
If you hate, the dakness of prison will spread over the universe.

Waiting for your correction

Mine:

عندما لا يكون أمامكَ أي عمل، انتهز الفرصة في القيام بأشياء مفيدة وإبداعية.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

When you don't have any work to do . just take the opportunity by doing creative useful things …

Mine

ابحث في ذاك العقل الخَرِب عن معنى وجودك في هذه الحياة . لن تجد إلا إجابة واحدة أكيدة : نحن عباد الله ...

Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

When you don't have any work to do . just take the opportunity by doing creative useful things …

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It's good

Just instead of using full stop you should put a comma as you see in the quote :)

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Mine

ابحث في ذاك العقل الخَرِب عن معنى وجودك في هذه الحياة . لن تجد إلا إجابة واحدة أكيدة : نحن عباد الله ...

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If you want to know the essence of your existence, then you have just to look for it in that mind of yours, and you'll find there is only certain answer that is we are worshippers of Allah.

Hmm, by the way, I don't know a nice word as an equivalent of
خرب

^^" So I didn't translate it

Waiting for your correction

My sentence:

ومرة أخرى تخونه الذاكرة فينسى لقاءً مهمًا.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

hi sis ... how are you
???
peace be upon u

about mine ... ya " comma" is very very important
i really forgot it

about the word
" خرب " huhuh
there are many words with the same meaning
sorry to make u confuse
if i were u i'd put " ruined " it will be okay

[i love ur way in translating

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okay
about urs

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and again ,he didn't remember and forgot an important meeting

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hope to correct me directly***


mine

المصيبة أن سرعة اتصال الانترنت ستقودني لمشفى المجانين قريبا ...

okay ... good luck

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

hi sis ... how are you
???
peace be upon u

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Hello dear sis Do Ri Me, I'm fine thanks, what about you? ^^

And peace to you

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about mine ... ya " comma" is very very important
i really forgot it

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No problem :)

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about the word
" خرب " huhuh
there are many words with the same meaning
sorry to make u confuse
if i were u i'd put " ruined " it will be okay

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Yes I know some of them especially ruined, but I was afraid they may not be nice or appropriate so, I thought of another verb and nothing came of it lol

Thanks for your answer

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[i love ur way in translating

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Thanks dear :)

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okay
about urs

and again ,he didn't remember and forgot an important meeting

hope to correct me directly***

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Yes, it is correct :)

By the way, there is two nice expressions as a translation of

خانتني الذاكرة

We can say: My memory lets me down or My memory fails me

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المصيبة أن سرعة اتصال الانترنت ستقودني لمشفى المجانين قريبا ...

okay ... good luck

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My Internet's speed is really a catastrophe, and may leads me to the madmen's hospital.

Is it correct?

Mine:

بينما الناس يطلبون المساعدة، ظل فلان واقفًا وقفة المتفرج دون أن يُحرك ساكنًا لمد يد العون لهم.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي أمان الله ورعايته

While people wanted the help , he kept standing with no move to help them


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هل ما زلت تظن أنك أقوى البشر ؟

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While people wanted the help , he kept standing with no move to help them

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Good

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هل ما زلت تظن أنك أقوى البشر ؟

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Do you still believe that you are the strongest man?

Is it correct?

Mine:

ليتَني الآن بمزاج جيد، فما حدث اليوم لا يمكنني نسيانه بسهولة.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

I hope that I'm in good mood now .. but what happened today , I could never forget it

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لو كنت مكاني لانتقمت !

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة موديا1992

I hope that I'm in good mood now .. but what happened today , I could never forget it

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Good

But in this sentence there is a wish not hope

Because, I said

ليتَني

So, we will say:

I wish (that) I'm in a good mood now

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لو كنت مكاني لانتقمت !

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If you were in my place, you would revenge!

Mine:

أقدم المجرم على الانتحار بعدما ارتكب جريمته النكراء.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

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the criminal committed suicide after he had done his atrocious crime

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mine

إنه يوم الجمعة ، لا تنسَ تلاوة سورة الكهف .

okay I hope u didn't forget that
with my love everyone

في آمان الله و رعايته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

mine

إنه يوم الجمعة ، لا تنسَ تلاوة سورة الكهف .

okay I hope u didn't forget that
with my love everyone

في آمان الله و رعايته

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well come back

دوري :)

It's Friday, do not forget to read Surat Al-Kahf.

my turn

رضا الوالدين اولا واخيرا فلاتعصيهما


your brother loly222

Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

إنه يوم الجمعة ، لا تنسَ تلاوة سورة الكهف .

okay I hope u didn't forget that
with my love everyone

في آمان الله و رعايته

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May Allah give you the best reward for reminding us :)

OK, here the translation:

It's Friday, so don't forget to recite Surat Al-Kahf.i

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة loly222

رضا الوالدين اولا واخيرا فلاتعصيهما

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Above all you must obey your parents to make them satisfied.

I hope it's correct

Mine:

كلما مرت علي ذكريات حزينة، أحاول قدر استطاعتي محوها من ذاكرتي.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

hi brother loly ...
u know it's the 1st time I realized that u r a boy not a girl
anyhow ...
ur answer is okay
but
the better is to say ... recite instead of read
as my dear sis Fatima said
that's coz it's the holly Qura'an

and thanx my sis

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every time that sorrowful memorycame at mind , I tried my best to get rid of it from my memory

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hope it's correct this time ^^"

mine

الشك المفرط كان سبب مقتل هاملت ، بينما الغيرة المفرطة أودت بحياة عطيل و زوجه .

مانها صعبة ؟؟^^"

okay dears good luck

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

and thanx my sis

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You are welcome

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every time that sorrowful memorycame at mind , I tried my best to get rid of it from my memory

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I think there is no need to add that after every time

We can add it if we identify the memory we mean by

But here memories is in general.

And also, you don't have to repeat memory and you already said mind.

So we can say:

Every time my sorrowful memories came to mind, I did my best to get rid of them.

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الشك المفرط كان سبب مقتل هاملت ، بينما الغيرة المفرطة أودت بحياة عطيل و زوجه .

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The death of Hamlet is caused by his excessive doubt.
But Atel and his wife were killed because of their superfluous jealousy.

I hope it is correct ^^"

Mine:

كل امرئ يجزى بما فعل.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

Good evening english fourm's Folks

I see that you have got avery nice and educative game running over here

ok about the sentance

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كل امرئ يجزى بما فعل.

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every body is rewared for what he or she have done

hope it's perfect

and my sentance is

لا يغلِبُ ذا اللّبِ في المقالِ إلا الجاهلُ .

see you soon
إن شاء الله .

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة zimaxo

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله

Good evening english fourm's Folks

I see that you have got avery nice and educative game running over here

ok about the sentance

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وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

Welcome zimaxo

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every body is rewared for what he or she have done

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has done

Yes good you can translate it like this, or we can say:

Every body will either be rewarded or punished depending on what he/ she has done.i

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and my sentance is

لا يغلِبُ ذا اللّبِ في المقالِ إلا الجاهلُ .

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The ignorant is the only one who defeats the intelligent in his/ her essay.

I somehow feel that is my translation is not good and really wrong, but I translated it like this as I see from your sentence. Waiting for your correction

Mine:

خير الكلام ما قل ودل.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Iam returning sorry for being late

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

Iam returning sorry for being late

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Welcome back Sharloc

No problem

Waiting for your translation and sentence :)

في حفظ الله ورعايته

oh ...thanks fatima :)

mm

Best words are few with full indication

الصديق عند الضيق

لا يغلِبُ ذا اللّبِ في المقالِ إلا الجاهلُ .
The ignorant is the only one who defeats the intelligent in his/ her essay

if i may say i would say : no one can win in argument with an ignorant

what do you think fatima

المشكلة بالأمثال العربية بأن ترجمتها ليست حرفية إنما يؤخذ معنى الجملة و يصاغ بطريقة انجليزية وهذا صعب ليس بسهل



Any way zimaxo welcome and be well

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

oh ...thanks fatima :)

mm

Best words are few with full indication

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You're welcome

Good

Or as the proverb says:

The least said the better.i

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الصديق عند الضيق

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A friend in need is a friend indeed.

Mine:

في الاتحاد قوة.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

لا يغلِبُ ذا اللّبِ في المقالِ إلا الجاهلُ .
The ignorant is the only one who defeats the intelligent in his/ her essay

if i may say i would say : no one can win in argument with an ignorant

what do you think fatima

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Yes, I agree with you, but all I did is translation his sentence ignoring weither it is true or not

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المشكلة بالأمثال العربية بأن ترجمتها ليست حرفية إنما يؤخذ معنى الجملة و يصاغ بطريقة انجليزية وهذا صعب ليس بسهل

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Yes that is true, and also the translator must have a knowledge about both languages, and this is not easy, that's why translation the proverbs is too difficult.i

في أمان الله

strength in union

oh mine will be a little hard : i think

القهار

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

strength in union

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or

Union is strength

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oh mine will be a little hard : i think

القهار

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The All Compelling Subduer

(It's not my translation since it is a name of Allah)

Mine:

بمساندة بعضهم البعض، انتصروا أخيرًا في مقارعة أعدائهم.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

nice :)

at the end they overcome their enemy by sticking together

Iam not sure it can be done other ways

any way waiting for your correction

في أمان الله و حفظه ورعايته ، لقد استمتعت فعلا في هذه المسابقة

hi sis Fatima
thanx for correcting me
ur answer is okay but
عطيل = Othello
not a big deal huhuh


hi brother sharloc holmez


الصديق عند الضيق

friend indeed is a friend in need
( طبعا ترجمت الصديق الحقيقيعند الضيق )


mine

الباذنجان على فوائده لا أحب تناوله .

okay good luck
time to go to ... university

see ya'

Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

nice :)

at the end they overcome their enemy by sticking together

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overcame

Good

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في أمان الله و حفظه ورعايته ، لقد استمتعت فعلا في هذه المسابقة

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Yes I enjoyed it, too

OK

في أمان الله وحفظه

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

hi sis Fatima
thanx for correcting me
ur answer is okay but
عطيل = Othello
not a big deal huhuh

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Hi dear sis Do Ri Me

Lol I thought it's an Arabic name, sorry but I have no idea about these names since I haven't read anything written by Shakespear yet ^^"

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الباذنجان على فوائده لا أحب تناوله .

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همم ماذا تعني على هنا؟

OK, I try to translate it according to my simple understanding ^^"

Despite the benefits of eggplant, I don't like eating it.

Here, I am not sure of the word benefits

May be there is a specefic word used when we talk about healthy and good food.i

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time to go to ... university

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وفقكِ الله أختي :)

My sentence:

لكل شيء إيجابياته وسلبياته.

في حفظ الله ورعايته

oh no i did a mistake and put
على
sorry i was thingking of another thing
huhuhuh
can't beievev i wrote s.th like that
pardon me coz of fasting can't concentrain of any thing

ho ho ho

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Do Ri Me

oh no i did a mistake and put
على
sorry i was thingking of another thing
huhuhuh
can't beievev i wrote s.th like that
pardon me coz of fasting can't concentrain of any thing

ho ho ho

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No problem ^^ sometimes it happens :)

OK, is it right? If not what is the correct one?

Waiting for you

في حفظ الله ورعايته

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لكل شيء إيجابياته وسلبياته.

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Everything has it's negatives and positives



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أنت أتيت لحياتي لتوقف دموعي icon152

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة موديا1992

Everything has it's negatives and positives

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Hmm, I think positive and negative are adjectives, so we cannot add s

Perhaps if we say, advantages and drawbacks it would be better.i

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أنت أتيت لحياتي لتوقف دموعي icon152

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You came to my life to stop my tears.

Is it right?

Mine:

لا تنسَ ذكر الله.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Iam back :)

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overcame

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thanks Fatima for correction

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لا تنسَ ذكر الله.

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Never forget to worship allah

i think

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

Iam back :)

thanks Fatima for correction

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Welcome back Sharloc

You are welcome

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Never forget to worship allah

i think

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Allah

We say worship when we do what Allah ordered us
I mean:
عبادة

But in this sentence we want to thank Allah.

So, we can say:

Never forget to praise Allah.

Waiting for your sentence

في حفظ الله

i dont know why i forget this word
praise

thanks again :)

mmm what about

فلما يأست من كل أحد جثوت ، بكيت ، سألت الله فقلت يا رب فرج علي كربتي ...

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

mmm what about

فلما يأست من كل أحد جثوت ، بكيت ، سألت الله فقلت يا رب فرج علي كربتي ...

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hmm, let's see...

When I lost hope of everyone, I knelt and cried to invoke Allah for driving away my grief.

Is it correct?

OK, try this one:

اعمل لدنياكَ كأنكَ تعيش أبدًا، واعمل لآخرتكَ كأنكَ تموت غدًا.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Hello all
mmmmmm,, I'll try fatom

Work to your life as you live for ever, and for your afterlife as you die tomorrow.
I hope it's correct ;)

hmmmmmmm
فلما أردت أن أصحح موقفي، قلبت الأمور رأسًا على عقب

good luck

modification
knelt and cried to invoke Allah;
I think it's better to say:
I knelt, cried, and asked Allah

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Hello all
mmmmmm,, I'll try fatom

Work to your life as you live for ever, and for your afterlife as you die tomorrow.

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Hello Sosah

I think:

Work for your

Yes you can say that or you just say:

Make the best of both worlds. (Idiom)i

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modification
knelt and cried to invoke Allah;
I think it's better to say:
I knelt, cried, and asked Allah

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You know, your translation was my first attempt but I changed it because I liked to use the verb "to invoke"i

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فلما أردت أن أصحح موقفي، قلبت الأمور رأسًا على عقب

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As soon as I had wanted to fix my attitude, things were turned out upside down.

Is it correct?

Mine:

سيكون الغد بإذن الله يومًا حافلًا. فإذا قمتُ بكل ما أنوي فعله حقًا، فإنني سأحقق إنجازًا مذهلًا.

:d

Good luck

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Tomorrow will be eventful day -if Allah wants -. If I do all what I am planning for, I will achieve great accomplishment.

xD
i suppose it's right xDDD

hmmmm
here it goes

لم أعد الساذجة التي كانت، صرت قادرة على اتخاذ قراري بنفسي
XD
it just came on ma mind
good luck
n btw ur sentence z right

Peace

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Sos_chan

Tomorrow will be eventful day -if Allah wants -. If I do all what I am planning for, I will achieve great accomplishment.

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will be an eventful... I will achieve a great

Good

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لم أعد الساذجة التي كانت، صرت قادرة على اتخاذ قراري بنفسي

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I'm no longer that naive girl who wasn't able to make a decision by herself. How that changed now!

The second sentence it is like a confirmation of the first one.

But I liked to add it, LOL

I hope it is right

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n btw ur sentence z right

Peace

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Aha thanks

My turn:

إن بعض الظن إثم.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

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الجملة الاولى : لكم أود لو أن العالم أصبح مكانا أفضل لوجودي فيه ، أو لكم أود أن يصبح العالم مكانا أفضل بسببي.
الجملة الثانية :حتى و على هذا المسرح الصغير فلدى كل شخص منا جانباه وبمكن إحداث فرق إذا ألقى الشخص بكل ثقله ( هنا يقصد جهده أو عمله أو فكره ) على ميزان (جانب ) قدرته أو تسامحه أو عطفه أو هدوئه أو مسالمته أو لطفه بالانسان و الحيوان
الجملة الأخيرة :ليس كلنا يستطيع إحداث فرق كبير (تغيير كبير ) في هذا العالم لكن حتى تلك الاختلافات البسيطة (التغييرات البسيطة ) تحتسب إحداثا للفرق

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Hi Sharloc...this is great
loool..mine was rubbish..anyways, thanks for the correction

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إن بعض الظن إثم.

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Hmm...sorry I will not try that, my English is far from translating Qur'an,I can't take this responsibility

Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Harry Potter

Hmm...sorry I will not try that, my English is far from translating Qur'an,I can't take this responsibility

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The translators of Koran depend on it's verses' meaning

But anyway their translations are still difficult and almost impossible

OK, here the meaning:

Verily some suspicion is a sin.

I am sorry to choose a verse to translate

Harry, It's your turn to put a new sentence

في حفظ الله ورعايته

Oh,Yeah..I forgot

قتل طالب كلية بسبب صخرة سقطت من منحدر في شرق تايوان

when I was talking about Qur'an, I was talking about myself, but of course, it's entirely possible for any otherone to be able to do this, so you don't have to be sorry

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Harry Potter

when I was talking about Qur'an, I was talking about myself, but of course, it's entirely possible for any otherone to be able to do this, so you don't have to be sorry

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Ah, OK, thanks

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قتل طالب كلية بسبب صخرة سقطت من منحدر في شرق تايوان

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In Taiwan's East, a collegiate student was killed due to a fallen rock from a slop.

Is it correct?

OK, try this:

لكل جواد كبوة.

للمساعدة: هناك مثل إنجليزي يقابل هذا المثل العربي.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

Every tide has its ebb

Peace be upon you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

Every tide has its ebb

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Very good

Now it is your turn

في حفظ الله ورعايته

Peace upon you too Fatima It's nice to be back

إن المستصعب قليل مستدرك ، فالامتحان لم يكن صعبا بل كان سهلا ممتنعا .

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the one who found it difficult has a little perception , the test wasn't difficult but inaccessible easy

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correction : and it was my mistake that i didn't put signals sorry

what seems difficult ( or hard ) is very little for those who can do it , the test wasn't difficult ( or hard ) but merely inaccessbile


فلما يأست من كل أحد جثوت ، بكيت ، سألت الله فقلت يا رب فرج علي كربتي ...

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When I lost hope of everyone, I knelt and cried to invoke Allah for driving away my grief

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nice use of invoke and you could use anguish instead of grief

جملتي :

أسأت استخدام الجهاز فكاد أن يودي بحياتي ...

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sharloc holmez

Peace upon you too Fatima It's nice to be back

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Thanks

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فلما يأست من كل أحد جثوت ، بكيت ، سألت الله فقلت يا رب فرج علي كربتي ...
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nice use of invoke and you could use anguish instead of grief

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Aha, thanks for the correction

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جملتي :

أسأت استخدام الجهاز فكاد أن يودي بحياتي ...

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Do you mean by
الجهاز
Computer? or it is in general

If it is in general, I think we could translate it like this:

I was about to be killed because of my misusing of the system.

Is it correct?

Now, try this:

التوكل على الله عبادة عظيمة.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

i mean system in general and that's could be named machine

Relying on Allah is a great worship

الأصدقاء الحقيقيون يصعب إيجادهم ، يصعب تركهم ، ويستحيل نسيانهم

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الأصدقاء الحقيقيون يصعب إيجادهم ، يصعب تركهم ، ويستحيل نسيانهم

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True friends are hard to find, hard to break up (leave) and impossible to forget

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In Taiwan's East, a collegiate student was killed due to a fallen rock from a slop.

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Right, and by the way , that happened in 1975

Oh, I forgot to put my sentence

ما لا يدرك كله , لا يترك كله

Good Luck